TRANSLATIONS, Part I. -- Переводы, Часть I.

[origa]

These are all the haiku in English and Russian. Some statistic, as always: 145 poems by 62 poets from 22 countries. A deliberately modest numbers this time as I am in time-trouble (Zeitnot) -- THANK  YOU all, dear haiku friends!  Please take your time to read the four parts of the translations and discuss all the poems, choose your favorites. I'll

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[ersh1_1]

My favorites of this part are:

sudden halt -
the mustang’s heart
keeps running

Valeria Simonova-Cecon, Italy

summer sunrise -
uplifting my heart
towards the sky

Cristina-Monica Moldoveanu, Romania

balloon in the sky -
flying among the birds,
my dream

Omilla, Bulgaria

всё выше
на спине у дикой лошади
только небо

Марина Даренская, Россия

(здесь, должна признаться, 2-3 строчки меня восхищают, а 1я, имхо, уступает им.)

[origa]

Спасибо, Хана. Коротко и ясно (и чуток дипломатии, как всегда :)

[ext_384810]

I need to thank you, ersh, because you noticed my last haiku; that was my favorite from those I wrote, but tastes differ.

[origa]

I think Hana (ersh) wasn't the only one who noticed it, Cristina? At least that's how I remember ...

my favorite

[jacek_jaal]

В целом конкурсе много интересных стихов.
Особенно здесь мне понравились:
(My favorites from this section:)

midday heat -
a mustang herd
brings the wind
Valeria Simonova-Cecon, Italy
(Красивоe представление, лёгкость и динамика.)

balloon in the sky -
flying among the birds,
my dream
Omilla, Bulgaria
(Мои сны иногда тоже летают :-)

Re: my favorite

[omilla]

Спасибо Вам, jacek jaal!

my favorite

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sudden halt -
the mustang's heart
keeps running

Valeria Simonova-Cecon, Italy

Summer sunrise -
uplifting my heart
towards the sky

Cristina-Monica Moldoveanu, Romania

Re: my favorite

[origa]

Thank you for sharing your choices, dear Annie :)

Favorite Part I

[anonymous]

lifting higher

the hoofs

of midsummer heat

by Susan Diridoni

Re: Favorite Part I

[origa]

Thank you for your comment, whoever you are :)

Re: Favorite Part I

[origa]

Finally, I checked this IP address -- and can properly thank you, Terry! :)