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Glee - Fic: It's Hard To Argue When You Won't Stop Making Sense

Jul 26, 2010 22:39

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oroborusfox July 29 2010, 10:05:08 UTC

Tnanks!

kidney8 July 27 2010, 03:52:42 UTC

Wow Ray sounds too perfect! Where can I find me one of those? All the hot ones are utterly lame/lack emotion.

oroborusfox July 29 2010, 10:06:30 UTC

Well, he's not perfect! He just... knows what he wants. I guess?

Thanks for commenting!

madndizzee July 27 2010, 04:21:43 UTC

I love you! Yes for another instalment of boy!Rachel! I thoroughly enjoyed every word of this. :D Angsty and sweet and sexy, as well as an awesome ending. More please!

oroborusfox July 29 2010, 10:09:44 UTC

Thank you!

More? Really?!

I would actually really love to write a companion piece from Ray's point of view, but I have to work on getting his voice right.

madndizzee July 29 2010, 12:46:58 UTC

Yes, more! I'll take companions pieces, and then hopefully you can write more of their life together. :P

kebq14 July 27 2010, 05:10:54 UTC

OMG!!!! YOU DID IT!!!
AMAZING AS ALWAYS!!
:)

oroborusfox July 29 2010, 10:10:07 UTC

THANK YOU!

;)

jacketweather July 27 2010, 05:21:53 UTC

Oh my gosh I was so excited to see an update to this! Ray's a cutie. Loved his parents and Puck and Santana's bet. Favorite part though: “I’d like to take you out, on a date, where we would have a meal, talk, maybe see a movie and not have sex after.” He pauses, “Though the last bit is negotiable. And this is for you.”

oroborusfox July 29 2010, 10:12:12 UTC

Thanks.

The bet was because I wanted to recreate the Puck/Rachel relationship a little, but could only imagine Santana going for it for selfish reasons (a dream just wasn't gonna cut it.) It ended up being one of my fav sections, so glad you enjoyed.

jacketweather July 30 2010, 17:17:51 UTC

I see, I didn't even think how similar that is. It worked pretty well I'd say. Did I also mention earlier how much I loved Spanish as a sex metaphor? I just reread the story and it was just as hilarious the second time. "You just need to make sure you use the proper nouns when conjugating verbs" doesn't even make sense but is funny anyway. And of course "no still means no" is just awesome.

oroborusfox July 30 2010, 18:58:32 UTC

Well I wasn't too interested in making it a direct parallel, but still had girl/boy dates R Berry for not the best of reasons, then is rejected because both parties want someone else (Quinn/Brittany and Finn/Quinn). And bad girl/boy and R Berry are unexpectedly hot together. A big part of why I'd love to write a companion piece from Ray's point of view is to talk about Ray/Santana.

Man, the Spanish conversation. Truly ridiculous. I was so happy when I realised that 'no' in Spanish is 'no'. Once I knew that the whole thing wrote itself.

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