LJ Idol S11 Week 1: "Resolution"

Sep 28, 2019 09:27


Resolution and Revolution

The graffiti is stark and violent looking-- bright, poppy red with little drips down the word. Just the one word, with a slash cutting through the word it’s replacing. Simple, really.

It’s been popping up all over town, and if there’s one thing Eli’s sure of it’s that this case of sign debasement is not being tolerated. ( Read more... )

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marlawentmad September 29 2019, 20:21:32 UTC

I am delighted by this. You did great work outlining a world and a personality in a short amount of space. Well done!

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orockthro October 4 2019, 16:44:09 UTC
Thanks! I tried hard to keep it short, haha. Such a challenge, lol. I'm glad it worked. <3

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roina_arwen September 30 2019, 00:45:10 UTC
This is awesome- love the twist!

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orockthro October 4 2019, 16:44:16 UTC
Thank you! :D

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encrefloue September 30 2019, 17:17:58 UTC
Love that he's gaming the system and dismantling it all at once! Though in such a high-surveillance state, I can't help but worry that his pattern is too noticeable. No risk, no revolution, though! Great, tidy piece.

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orockthro October 4 2019, 16:44:56 UTC
Ha! You're sweet to consider the ramifications for him. I imagine he is not the only one operating in such a way.
^__^
But yes. Sometimes you must act, even with risk. Thank you!

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karmasoup October 1 2019, 01:37:48 UTC
Love it. Viva la revolution!

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orockthro October 4 2019, 16:45:07 UTC
:D Yes! (Thank you!)

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millysdaughter October 1 2019, 04:09:37 UTC
LOL
yes

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orockthro October 4 2019, 16:45:18 UTC
Ha!
TY.

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