LJ Idol S11 Week 1: "Resolution"

[orockthro]

Resolution and Revolution

The graffiti is stark and violent looking-- bright, poppy red with little drips down the word. Just the one word, with a slash cutting through the word it’s replacing. Simple, really.

It’s been popping up all over town, and if there’s one thing Eli’s sure of it’s that this case of sign debasement is not being tolerated.

Comments

[sweeny_todd]

this was fantastic!

[orockthro]

^__^ Thanks!

[rayaso]

What a great twist and a clever use of the topic! You do an excellent job creating an Orwellian society and opposition to it in such a short story.

[orockthro]

Thank you! Yes, I really challenged myself to keep it short and still convey what I needed to. I'm glad it worked!

[murielle]

Very well done!

[orockthro]

Thank you! :D

[m_malcontent]

Enjoyed the twist

[orockthro]

:D Thanks!

[morettaallstar]

This is such interesting start into a dystopia. Left me wanting more!

[orockthro]

:D Thank you! It will be a stand alone piece, but I'm glad it left you curious!