Everything Looks Perfect From Far Away (Tezuka/Ryoma)

[spurious]

title: Everything Looks Perfect From Far Away
pairing: Tezuka/Ryoma
words: 330
rating: PG
summary: Futurefic. Ryoma hates reporters.
notes: Thanks to sparklespiff for helping me make this presentable. Title from Such Great Heights by The Postal Service.

Comments

[weirdlyyours]

Cute and just a bit sad. :(( The last line wins. ♥

[spurious]

Hee. I was quite happy with the last line. :D

[miska158]

Someone's been playing with my mind, because as I read the newspaper headline in the story, I immediately thought Fuji on a killing spree for touching his Tezuka. No, not a Pillar Pair fan, but this was great! Very believable, and a little sad as well. Loved it ^.^

[spurious]

Haa. While I was having a friend look it over, she said she was worried people were going to think Ryoma and Tezuka were serial killers. I said they would be called the "Pillar Killers", and they'd impale people with pillars. XD Anyway, glad you liked!

[tani]

Oh, great job. Loved the use of canon in this and that even though it's so short, it does such a wonderful job of conveying character. ♥

[spurious]

Thank you so much! I always sort of have a hard time pinning these two down, and it's really nice to hear that I've done it well.

[inner_demons_]

Aw! That was so sad! I usually don't like Ryoma/Tezuka but this was really well written. I like the last line a lot, you did a very good job ^_^

[spurious]

:) glad you liked! thanks.

[anonymous]

That was good!

It's hard to come across good one-shot fics that ALSO have a good ending. :)

[spurious]

Thank you!! :D