The bias definitely appeals :-). And I think you have captured the essential...flavors of the ducklings quite well. Of the three, Chase has the least research-oriented specialty, so it doesn't surprise me that he'd handle things a bit differently.
The writing's a little loose and could be tightened a bit, but overall a nice little drabble.
I'm not sure what you mean by the writing being "a little loose" though. It's only 200 words. Hee! If I tightened it up much more, I don't think I would have had enough words to make it say what I needed it to. :)
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The writing's a little loose and could be tightened a bit, but overall a nice little drabble.
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I'm not sure what you mean by the writing being "a little loose" though. It's only 200 words. Hee! If I tightened it up much more, I don't think I would have had enough words to make it say what I needed it to. :)
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