House fic?

Dec 12, 2006 15:48

A wee double-drabble House-ficlet, just to get the thing out of my head.

Why, yes. It is exactly 200 words. )

house

Leave a comment

Comments 18

clarkangel December 12 2006, 20:29:19 UTC
Awesome. This fits them all so perfectly.

Reply

ossiannic December 13 2006, 13:15:08 UTC
Thanks! It's reassuring when other people think you've gotten the characters down alright. :)

Reply


npkedit December 12 2006, 20:39:05 UTC
The bias definitely appeals :-). And I think you have captured the essential...flavors of the ducklings quite well. Of the three, Chase has the least research-oriented specialty, so it doesn't surprise me that he'd handle things a bit differently.

The writing's a little loose and could be tightened a bit, but overall a nice little drabble.

Reply

ossiannic December 13 2006, 13:18:01 UTC
So you share the bias, too? Cool!

I'm not sure what you mean by the writing being "a little loose" though. It's only 200 words. Hee! If I tightened it up much more, I don't think I would have had enough words to make it say what I needed it to. :)

Reply


chicating December 12 2006, 22:16:42 UTC
Cameron could be good at it, but she has an Approval Problem.

Reply

ossiannic December 13 2006, 13:18:34 UTC
Yeah, Cameron definitely has a few issues to work through. :)

Reply

chicating December 13 2006, 18:23:14 UTC
I relate to her desire to get a gold star at life, sometimes. But that is one way life is not like school.

Reply


blazeorfade December 14 2006, 21:04:26 UTC
The characterizations are dead on here. I think of all the ducklings, Chase is probably the most House-like. Very good.

Reply

ossiannic December 15 2006, 19:45:49 UTC
Thanks! I'm glad the characterizations seemed okay to you. :)

Reply


Leave a comment

Up