I'm going to write another beginning for the story. Personally, I thought it was awful. God awful. So bad, I think if I gave it enough time, God would teleport into my house and say "W-T-F is that?!". I think it looked like it was made by a eleven-year-old who watches to many action movies and kiddy cartoons. I'm gonna try to take a more serious ( Read more... )

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Hey guys, after like a month of working (2 1/2 weeks of acutal work), I have finished the short awaited part 2 to the Gate story.

Introduction, Part 2

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In the middle of  fanfics, here is something for you guys ( Read more... )

The screen fades into a scene of a city. It is grand and clean with skies that look as blue as a star on the midnight sky. A building stands out from all the rest in the city, a skyscraper made from white concrete with clear windows. “4:27 P.M.” in subtitles. Just then, an explosion comes from the top windows of the skyscraper. As flames form from ( Read more... )