Comments | outoflove: confusing? i think yes..

outoflove

confusing? i think yes..

Mar 29, 2007 01:39

i often feel as if i'm living my life as you do in dreams, detatched and observing yourself as a bystander...

although i may be
your missing piece
although you may be
all the colors
my canvas craves
although i let your embrace
mold me
my form will return
once you've let go
and when this stairway
crumbles as we climb
this heart will take refuge
in a room ( Read more... )

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MEZCAL [ How Ginsberg Might Reply ] mezcal March 31 2007, 02:44:52 UTC

Red cheeked boyfriends tenderly kiss me sweet mouthed
under Boulder coverlets winter springtime
hug me naked laughing & telling girl friends
gossip till autumn

Future youth I never may touch any more
Hark these Sapphics lipped by my hollow spirit
everlasting tenderness breathed in these vowels
sighing for love still

Breast struck scared to look in his eyes blood pulsing
my ears mouth dry tongue never moved ribs shook a
trembling fire ran down from my heart to my thighs
Love-sick to this day

Heavy limbed I sat in a chair and watched him
sleep naked all night afraid to kiss his mouth
tender dying waited for sun rise years a-
go in Manhattan

Measure forever his face eighteen years old
green eyes blond hair muscular gold soft skin whose
god like boy’s voice mocked me once three decades past
Come here and screw me

Re: MEZCAL [ How Ginsberg Might Reply ] outoflove March 31 2007, 05:30:48 UTC

you wrote all this? wow i love it. and as always, frighteningly close to the truth.

MEZCAL [ Policy ] mezcal March 31 2007, 05:38:07 UTC

No, Ginsberg wrote that. Otherwise I would not have mentioned him in the brackets with that title or omitted my usual comment byline: -MEZCAL. I abridged the poem, the title of which I can not retype. I agree that it is good and merely wanted to share it with you. Rest assured, everything on my own journal is original, though not necessarily worthy of such praise.

-MEZCAL

Re: MEZCAL [ Policy ] outoflove March 31 2007, 05:42:03 UTC

oh. well since you said how ginsberg might reply i thought you were attempting to copy his style with your own words.. ok never mind. anyways, thanks for sharing it. <3

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haha, not my style but i'll try ;) (awkward) writtenscenery March 31 2007, 22:35:26 UTC

she said to be here
i showed up early
i stud at her door and she brought her body close
all black
red rose pedals
chucks yelled against the floor
the lava lamp next to her bed glowed green
she said "yes" and never talked
her teeth her bite my lips
it went dark
my tshirt on the television
her pants ruffled in the sheets
the suns rising too early
her face surrounded the room
the dust in the sunray hovered lightley
dead silence
our thoughts screaming
our hearts pounding
my belt clicked and my keys jingled
i aimed for the door
her hand pulled my wrist
face to face again
"i love you" she said
"see you tomorrow" I said
the car started
i rubbed my eyes open
weeks and weeks go by
the phone rings to her
i knock on the door
and we traveled back in time

haha i know this sucks, it's the best i could do in like 2 seconds though

booty call outoflove April 2 2007, 02:53:55 UTC

too much info about rocky's sexual life LOL but i still liked it

<333elisa