Georgia Peach

[outuendo_11]

Title: Georgia Peach
Author: outuendo_11
Rating: M...kind of for some mature stuff.
Pairing: Sharon/Brenda
Show: The Closer
Disclaimer: I don't own them. 
Summary: Sharon has Sunday morning shopping to accomplish, but someone gets in her way. 
Author's note: Um, consider this my apology for no "Through the Music...", but how about this. I will post more of "F$*ked

Comments

[spedlady]

Thank you! A story where we disposed of Fritz before the intimacy!

[outuendo_11]

Ha, is that rare for me to not write him out of the picture? Thank you for reading and reviewing! You're welcome. :)

[they_regrey]

I still love your characterisation of Sharon (especially her slightly unorthodox approach to problem solving ;) ), I still love the interaction between her and Brenda, and I'm still really looking forward to updates on your other stories :)

[outuendo_11]

Why thank you. And I think Sharon is a bit unorthodox in her approach at times. She always has to keep you guessing, I guess! Thanks for the review. :) And yes, more is coming soon!

[outuendo_11]

I totally agree with you. I think it all comes together in the end and I think the reader can take what they want from it. I'm glad you enjoyed it. :) Thanks for reviewing.

[nvgvup]

and her active libido had kept her in bed for a few too many hours.
Dare I ask if she was alone.... :D

Ooh Sharon's wrath in the grocery store - verrrry nicely written!

Okay I stopped picking out specific lines in the middle because I got too wrapped up in the story, which is a compliment to you and maybe also a comment about me :/

This is a terrific one-shot hun, you don't tell us everything - you show us what we need to know. The specifics are made irrelevant by the clear emotions between the two women and all the layers in what they are processing through. Sorry you don't get a more detailed comment - I'd be quoting back the entire thing to tell you what I liked. The whole emotion of the piece is stirring.

[outuendo_11]

Well I shall take your whole comment as a compliment. I'm really glad you enjoyed this little one-shot that came out of nowhere. It was supposed to be happy...but Sharon made me bring the angst. I blame her.

I'm glad I could write something that seems to have affected you in a stirring way. That's a compliment in it's own that this silly little piece could move you. But I really am glad you enjoyed it. Thanks for reading it. :) and reviewing.

[lil_sis24]

That was amazing to read! I liked the way you described the characters and the way Sharon thought... that was very good!
thanks for the read :)