Heart Heavy

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Comments

[ptcruz]

So this is just....beautiful in a sad kind of way. You've conveyed so perfectly the sadness & heartbreak that are still inside Jenny just waiting to come out. Even after 'all this time' It's a pain that I think only someone who's lost a parent can really understand. You want them here. Still looking out for you, still handling things. Because you're still not quite ready to be a 'grownup'. Unfortunately, Jenny has no choice. The beauty comes from Emma, and the others, to be the anchor to her life. Mostly from Emma, who knows just what and how much Jenny needs to bring herself back from the edge. I hope this made sense. Wonderful as always!!!!!!! =)

[owl_wishes]

Oh, thank you :) Sad stories are always harder to write. Actually no, they aren’t harder to write, just more draining, but they’re an important part of telling a story, because that pain always lingers. Thank you so much for your comment. :)

[lazerbug2006]

I love the way your writings flow so smoothly and you can picture each thing clearly. I like how Jenny just needs to hear Emma and her world is ok not perfect but ok for her to carry on! Emma's playfulness is beautiful even though it is a sad and hard thing to get through but she allows Jenny to know she will always keep her safe! I can't wait for more :) AWESOME doesn't even begin to cover your writings~

[owl_wishes]

That’s exactly what it is: not perfect, but okay, like if she’d look down, there would be solid ground beneath her feet again. This was so kind of you to say :)

Only one word

[anonymous]

Wow.

~ Anon

Re: Only one word

[owl_wishes]

Thank you, kind Anon. You made me smile.

[hpeek04]

All I can say is...WOW! This was absolutely perfect. You described Jenny's emotions so wonderfully, I could really feel the pain she is experiencing. And of course, Emma is there, now and forever, to catch her when she feels like she's falling...there to kiss and wish away the inner demons that haunt her in her sleep...there to love her. And Ben...I just love how he's always there with them, but somehow manages to fall asleep or get distracted at just the right moments ;) Wonderful job, hoping to read more soon? Please? :D

[owl_wishes]

Thank you :) After such a long break, I didn’t think there would be such a turn out when I posted the new story, but it warmed my heart to see all of these wonderful comments. I think that Ben understands when he’s needed, and when he should quietly drift off to sleep in the middle of a movie. It’s an understanding we have which lets me regularly put him in stories. ;)

thank you

[anonymous]

for keeping Jemma alive in your writing -- beautiful!

mxc

Re: thank you

[owl_wishes]

Thank you :) I’m glad you enjoy the stories.