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[oxygen_losers]

Title: Progress Of The Wolf (Standalone)

Rating: R

Pairing: Zacky/Brian, Matt/Zacky, Johnny/Jimmy

Summary: A quick character sketch of pack dynamics. Experimenting with style.

Comments

[infrom_under]

I hadn't been expecting literal pack dynamics, but it wasn't disappointing. I liked this and I don't think it was really over done (just, the way supernatural fiction can be, like vampires or something). And you've got some really beautiful lines. I think if you took this style and language and put it with some really realistic fiction it would work amazingly well. :]

[peopleareevil]

You have such a beautiful writing style. And I really liek this, which is suprising, as most supernatural fics just irritate me.

[oxygen_losers]

...and you know what, they irritate me, too. Which is why I wrote this. Because that makes sense, right?

[peopleareevil]

I think so.
I love your icon btw :P

[mandlebars]

usually A7x fics are so utterly shite, that when someone writes a fic like this it's just wrong. But this is really really good. Good job xoxo

[x_missdarko_x]

Most of the times when I'm reading supernatural fics, I'm thinking to myself that the story would be so much better if they just lose the male-pregnancy, witch powers or cheap vampire connection. But this story is just great the way it is. I like the atmosphere, that's for sure. Very nice descriptions!

And I might as well admit it, the icon is indeed very funny. I remember the first time I saw it, it made me smile. Ain't that nice. Whatever. Just keep writing...

[xraraavisx]

Hafta say I was a bit confused at first. I knew exactly what the guys were turning into, and I knew that during the day, they were human again, but I didn't fully understand the beginning of Zacky's imprisonment.Maybe that needs a little work?