Fic: Semisonic (Veronica/Logan) R

[oz_black_cat]

Title - Semisonic

Rating - R
Word Count - 1,095
Summary - This fic was written for vmfic_gameon's "Back to School" Challenge. File it under, "But, that didn't really happen!" Takes place at the start of Neptune High's Sophomore year. Lily is alive and Duncan doesn't exist.
Spoilers - None
Disclaimer - The cast of Veronica Mars belongs to Rob Thomas, but mostly he

Comments

[medjunkie]

I really liked this, LoVe are so sweet and carefree together, just as they started out at the end of S1.

[oz_black_cat]

Thanks, glad you liked it! I always imagined that's how they'd be if they got together early on, you know, before all the rubbish started happening to them... :)

[celtic_flicka]

Whoa--excellent twist! I loved that Veronica seemed so sweet and mostly carefree by the end, but then the darker side of Neptune High comes out again. I loved this story.

[oz_black_cat]

Thanks! I hope I didn't put you to shame with my unbetaed work :) I'm really glad you liked it.

[celtic_flicka]

Hee--no. Your punctuation is really improving. :)

[oz_black_cat]

YAY!!! I need a dancing icon... though methinks you are just being kind :)

[stephanierb]

I loved this. I must admit to some confusion on the first read as well, but, after a second read, I wouldn't change a thing. The presence of a third character is so subtle that the reveal really packs a punch. It's a great twist and giving anything away earlier on would take away from the story. I enjoy a good AU every now and again, so I won't complain if you ever decide to continue this. Terrific job.

[oz_black_cat]

Thanks very much! I wanted the twist to be a surprise otherwise it's not really a twist... :) I'm glad you enjoyed it and the amount of positive feedback I'm getting to the story makes me think I should continue! Though mustn't get dsitracted from my season 3 rewrite...

[p2880]

Lovely fic. I'll also confess to some confusion the first read through. I also reread immediately. Is there some kind of punctuation that could be added to clear it up without revealing the twist? After all the twist is really great and the point of the story!

[oz_black_cat]

Thank you for your kind words. I think the hardest thing about writing a twist is ensuring you don't give it away too early, otherwise, as I said above, the twist is pretty much redundant! I actually like that people have to read it again (not in an evil way of course!) because I was aiming for the reader to assume they were Veronica and not someone else, but thank you for your suggestion.

[whedonist]

Pre series fic ftw!

You have the voices down pat, the twist is excellent (and only momentarily confusing) and I definitely want more!

Great work!

[oz_black_cat]

Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it and that the twist didn't throw you for a loop :) I've never written pre-series before, so it was a nice change.