Fic: Semisonic (Veronica/Logan) R

Sep 09, 2009 12:45


Title - Semisonic

Rating - R
Word Count - 1,095
Summary - This fic was written for vmfic_gameon's "Back to School" Challenge. File it under, "But, that didn't really happen!" Takes place at the start of Neptune High's Sophomore year. Lily is alive and Duncan doesn't exist.
Spoilers - None
Disclaimer - The cast of Veronica Mars belongs to Rob Thomas, but mostly he ( Read more... )

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pegm81484 September 10 2009, 20:26:35 UTC
This was really good, I liked the idea of someone holding their secret.

Is this a one-shot? It seems like a really great first chapter lol.

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oz_black_cat September 13 2009, 12:35:43 UTC
Thank you! I hadn't planned on it being longer than just that chapter, but I'm getting a lot of positive feedback to it! Glad you liked it.

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ashleynichole10 September 11 2009, 02:47:32 UTC
ohh i like this!! very interesting cant wait until more

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oz_black_cat September 13 2009, 12:36:13 UTC
Thank you for reading and commenting. I'm glad you enjoyed it.

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elychari September 13 2009, 09:13:29 UTC
really interesting and hot. i liked the twist at the end when i realized it was cassie's point of view. had to reread it again just to be sure but if your intention was to surprise the reader, you've succeeded.

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oz_black_cat September 13 2009, 12:37:01 UTC
Thanks! I did hope to surprise people so I'm glad I pulled it off!

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spygrrl76 September 13 2009, 22:55:14 UTC
I think your experiment worked well. It did take me reading it a second time, knowing the twist, to fully get it, but it totally works. I love that it is actually all from Cassie's POV. I also second wanting to know more. That would be awesome!

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oz_black_cat October 17 2009, 05:13:52 UTC
Thanks for reading and commenting. I'm really pleased you enjoyed it and would like to see more!

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havemy_heart September 17 2009, 02:39:59 UTC
Awesome twist! I love pre-series where L/V get together this early and I wasn't confused at all. Some people need to take their blinders off or something :)

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oz_black_cat October 17 2009, 05:14:48 UTC
Thank you! I'm really pleased you enjoyed it and got it! Seems most people did which is great :)

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