commuter stress

[p_seudonym]

Hell is a crowded subway ride,
Close, and relentlessly long.
Every time you find a seat
Another old lady gets on.

Comments

[justneverended]

most excellent.

[p_seudonym]

thnx, yo.

[jezof]

You wrote this?
*my applause*
I don't really know, how to say it in english, well... but it's the first and the most truthful poem about the subway, i've ever read :))

[jezof]

sorry, if i made any grammar mistakes or any other mistakes

[p_seudonym]

yesss, I wrote it on the subway :)