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killing time (can i kill it with you?) (jundae, nc17, 10.5k)

Apr 28, 2014 00:12

Title: killing time (can i kill it with you?)
Author: hopeandmemory
Pairing: Jongdae/Junmyeon
Rating: NC-17
Word Count: 10,500
Summary: Jongdae goes to Martha's Vineyard to visit Junmyeon for a couple weeks of summer vacation.

( Jongdae fiddles with the cuff of his sweatshirt as he leans against the ferry’s railing, watching the coastline of the Vineyard come into clearer view. )

length: oneshot, fic: exo, pairing: jundae, rating: nc17

Comments 43

pageandpetals April 28 2014, 04:28:26 UTC

spot for sardothien bc reasons

sardothien April 28 2014, 05:58:11 UTC

LIZEUUUUUUUUUU ATTACKS YOU FROM ALL SIDES WITH CONFETTI AND PILLOWS

HUAhuhuahfuAhuhu YOU DID THE THING U MADE THE SEQUEL I AM SO HAPPY THIS WAS SO GLORIOUS AND AMAZING

i love your jongdae liz do u understand what a giant statement that is I LOVE YOUR JONGDAE I WANT TO CUDDLE HIM AND KISS HIM AND SUCK HIS BRAINS OUT THROUGH HIS DICK how did you do that how did you make me like him oh buT DONT GET ME STARTED ON YOUR JOONMYUN BC

“Well, I wouldn’t be if you weren’t so hot all the time, asshole,” Jongdae retorts, sticking his hips out to rub his body against Junmyeon’s. “Looking like you walked out of a J. Crew catalog, with your dumb windblown sex hair and your stupid muscular arms and the fact that you know how to sail a boat and gut a fish and probably a whole bunch of other wilderness crap. Ugh. You suck.”THE SHEER AMOUNT OF STARS IN MY EYES RN ELIZABETH KJdfhlskadjfhlak this was so nice to read it made me all happy and warm and fuzzy and have i mentioned that i love your porn BC I LOVE IT i love jundae i loVe YOUUUUU ( ... )

hopeandmemory April 28 2014, 11:58:55 UTC

IM SO GLAD YOU LIKED IT ;~~~~~~~;

i love to write jongdae, he's SO much fun. but i love junmyeon, too, even though he's not really a POV character in the stuff i've written. probably because there's so much of me in him, the anxiety about what he's going to do after college and his tendency to be a people-pleaser. he's a pretty well-adjusted guy but it's good that jongdae is there to talk him down when he gets too high-strung and caught up in other people's expectations of him. <3

that bit you quoted was one of my favorites to write. i love grumpy tsundere jongdae, lmfao. "I DON'T LOVE YOU AT ALL I JUST WANT TO WAKE UP NEXT TO YOU EVERY MORNING AND KISS YOU EVEN WHEN YOUR BREATH SMELLS??? ASSHOLE!!!" bless

ILU 2 <33333 i'm sososososo glad you enjoyed this, seriously ;~~~~~~~~~;

airplanewishes April 28 2014, 05:40:17 UTC

I was reading and somewhere I wondered if this was a continuation of Out of my League, and it turns out it is!!! You don't know how much I loved that, and how much I still do when I reread it. And now there's this and it's equally as perfect because SuChen boyfriends is glorious. And the way you write them, so domestic and so cute. They can't even get their hands off each other--I love this so much. ;w; And wow that house is so beautiful!!!

This is the best and you're the best. <3

hopeandmemory April 28 2014, 12:02:26 UTC

aaaah yes! i love OOML jundae, they were so fun to write the first time and this was even better since they weren't dancing around each other.

jongdae is a cuddler, what can i say. :3 and i think that's the most important part of relationships, friendships or otherwise, honestly. the ability to spend a day doing essentially nothing but enjoying each other's company... that's pretty important. jongdae would probably spend a day watching paint dry if there were snacks and a junmyeon to make out with, tbh.

i want to go to that house SO BAD YDEK!!!! omg it's so beautiful ;~;

i'm glad you liked this, thank you so much for commenting, frances :33333 <3

moon_things April 28 2014, 06:33:37 UTC

KILLING ME SOFTLY.MP3
i'm going 2 send u a fruitbasket this was so cuTE I GRINNED THE WHOLE WAY THROUGH
BLESS U

hopeandmemory April 28 2014, 12:03:33 UTC

i like pineapples, oranges, apples, and strawberries, for reference. :3

i'm glad you enjoyed this! thanks so much for reading and commenting, i really appreciate it!! :)

missingmisnomer April 28 2014, 07:37:12 UTC

Your suchen is doing gods work

hopeandmemory April 28 2014, 12:04:13 UTC

thank you so much, that's what i like to hear ㅋㅋㅋ thanks for reading and commenting!! :3

kaidol April 28 2014, 15:54:51 UTC

I'M SO HAPPY ABOUT THIS

I DON'T EVEN SHIP SUCHEN

I'M SO HAPPY ABOUT THIS.

AND chin's characterisation was so good

"May I suggest my penis," he suggests delicately made me laugh because aww that's so cute and polite and like, ugh

Ily, thanks for this selfindulgent fic w no angst so I dont have to cry thankq ❤❤❤❤❤

kaidol April 28 2014, 15:55:23 UTC

CHEN.NOT CHIN, WELL AUTOCORRECT wow.

hopeandmemory April 29 2014, 23:52:27 UTC

WHAT DO U MEAN U DON'T SHIP SUCHEN

we will have to remedy this :D

i hate angst, i try to never write it if i can avoid it!! i just want happiness and snuggles and blowjobs, that's all!! :3 hehe. i'm glad you liked this, thank you for reading and leaving a comment!!