Oneshot - Where Skies Meet End on End (part two)

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Comments

[jaedork]

i love this~<33

[cant_stop02]

thank you so much! ^^ ♥ (ooh your icon!!! :'D love it!)

[nivani]

♥♥♥

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:')) thank you ♥

[ekkusuchan]

this is oh-so-very-pretty... i love the imagery ♥ and especially love the ot5, almost as much as the soulmates' love ^.^

just some comments though, pls don't take this the wrong way. i thought that there could be more description on how or why soulmates fell in love with each other, i just felt that their connections weren't really felt. for something that was created within 2 weeks and half a year of emails, what have they gained, or missed? and within another half a year of jaejoong going MIA, what kept chun going strong? =)

[cant_stop02]

thank you! ♥

ahh, we thought so too. we tried our best to fit the entire plot into a reasonable word count, but obviously that failed. every time we added a scene the entire fic grew longer and longer. there were scenes taken out throughout the process and those were the details that described their relationship. i completely agree with you saying that we could have more details about it all. but the fic just ended up way too long so we had to cut back quite a bit. ...and on top of that we were late in sending this fic in.

anyway, thanks for the critique!

[ekkusuchan]

LOL, there was a word limit to this contest? it sounds long, but i think it can be longer~ greedy reader is greedy xDDD

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lol, there wasn't but we just wanted the whole thing to end quickly. and we thought that there probably wouldn't be anyone who was willing to read something over 20,000 words long. :(

[l4st_w0rds]

Oh, I can't explain to you how much I absolutely fell in love with this as soon as I started reading it! From Yoochun's monsters [and their descriptions] to the heartfelt banter between Changmin and Junsu - every last bit of it was my favorite.
Your writing style is really unique, and fit the story so well. It just flowed, and seemed to tell itself, and it was just beautiful!

Thanks so much for this wonderful addition to my memories! Don't ever delete this post! Ha ha ha. :D <3

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aw thank you so much! ♥ :) and yes, i'll definitely be keeping this around! :D

[be_ddelusionall]

YAY!!! it was sooooooo good!!! (even though i'm really mad that jaejoong just left yoochun hanging like that, but sometimes it's needed)!!!

well done!

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thanks! glad you enjoyed it :) ♥