A moment's grace

Apr 12, 2010 12:31

I work in San Francisco. Most days, I ride the Caltrain to work and back. Sometimes, when I have a social engagement in the East Bay, I walk a mile or so to the BART station and ride that into whichever station suits -- one of the Oakland stations if I'm visiting folks there, or Fremont for another group. Some days back, I was walking through a ( Read more... )

remember, writing, omphaloskepsis

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teawiththecheat April 13 2010, 03:35:50 UTC
You're sensitive; it's wonderful.

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chaosrose April 13 2010, 05:49:15 UTC
They lit a fire in you. It burns here.

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alanna_cooper April 14 2010, 02:33:06 UTC
Wow! I had no idea you were as good of a storyteller as your wife. This is beautifully written and in fact, more than ashes. Thank you for sharing.

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earthlien April 14 2010, 04:33:23 UTC
A breath that's held inside the head is held long just the same.

Your phoenix up from ashpit words flicks holographic flame.

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