Nothing less than Extravagant

[paleexistence]

I finally wrote. Maybe you have some positive criticism for my writing, or maybe it made you feel something. Maybe you have advice, or opinions. Perhaps you are just left speechless. Whatever it is, I haven't written anything in so long, so... Let me know please. I love you. thank you

Comments

[theatre_girl]

I surprised nobody has commented on this. I always am hesitant to comment on poetry, because it's such a personal thing. It's like releasing part of your soul onto paper and I don't know if I would criticize that.

I really like the flow of this. It sounds like the first writing in a while. It's like, you're getting started and it starts to flow. Then it progresses and flows a little heavier. Then it gushes. You writing always feels very genuine and humble. I commend you for being so open about your feelings. You choose a beautiful outlet.

I love you, Paige. Please take care of yourself.