"COFFEE STAIN"

[doppelgangerqaf]

TITLE: "COFFEE STAIN"
AUTHOR: doppelgangerqaf
BETAED BY: bigj52 and atomic_dawn.
RATING: I'm giving it an R.
GENRE: Ficlet.
WORD COUNT: 359 words.
A/N: Suggestions, criticisms are all welcome! Thanks!

Comments

[bombcel]

Ooh. .that was really good. I shudder in the end. It was kinda sad really. grabe talaga!!

[shadownyc]

This was a lovely piece. I could feel the emotions and hopes of the narrator.

[spike7451]

Wow! Amazing, and the ending...brilliant.

[1_rhiannon_1]

Wow! Very well-written! I didn't see the ending coming at all! :D Well done bb!

[luvbrian]

Wow - fabulous. Just the right amont of creepiness at the end. I love stories like this. Great job!