In the Wrong Pt 4

[papersanguine]

Title: "In the Wrong" 4/10
Rating: NC-17
Genre: Angsty smut again!
Warning: Some semi-hate smex!
Summary: Seungri tried so hard. So why did it feel that no matter what happened he always ended up in the wrong?

Comments

[parodying]

yes, long chapter is long. ♥ it's crazy how jittery i waited for this update.

i don't know what's going on inside ji's mind but i have a distinct wish to introduce his head to a brick wall. he's hurting maknae and he knows it but still does it anyway. oh you selfish bastard. i love how antagonistic he gets, while still maintaining that personality trait uniquely jiyong. still doesn't make me not want to shoot him in the dick though.

and maknae. ohgod maknae. what are you doing to yourself? why are you putting yourself down and i cannot break away from his inferiority complex. and idk. my heart breaks for him. i wish he wouldn't keep clinging onto the notion that everything will be alright with ji and keep allowing ji to hurt him mentally and physically. seriously, it breaks me up when i read the paragraph where he was all 'It wouldn’t be fair of me to hold him back' and I was all 'MAKNAE WHAT HAPPENED TO YOU' and then i just want tabi or bae to fix him and make him smile again

[papersanguine]

YOu guys have no idea how bad i want to bail on work to day and just stay home and write this fic. I have the next two each half done and seriously some of the stuff you wrote is totally coming up!!! hahaha you are so amazing!

I'll flail over your amazing comment when i come back!! brb

[parodying]

as much as i want you to skip work and continue writing, i don't want you to get into trouble okay. so don't worry, we'll wait patiently! you know we love you! :D

/MUNCHES ON YOUR BEDSHEET

[azenzensation_0]

OMG!!!!! WTF JI?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!? MAN IF YOU DONT WANT HIM IMMA TAKE HIM!!!!!!
THIS MADE ME ALL DEPRESSED!!!!! BUT I STILL LOVE IT!!!!! AND DAMNIT I WASNT FIRST!!!! I HAVE TO SHARPEN MY NINJA STALKING SKILLS!!! oh and sorry about all the caps lol

man i feel sooo bad for ri bb and i just want to punch ji!!!

[kwonjiyongvips]

Lol your comment made me ROFL

[papersanguine]

Lol i am never first either! I comfort myself with the knowlege that some people put updates on their phone where i am too broke to do that haha so don't feel too bad!

Ji totally deserves to be smacked around a bit. I think with your Ninja skillz you can totally teach him a lesson!

[azenzensation_0]

wait you can get updates on your phone???????? WHAT????? why didn't i know about this???

imma use my killer skillz to teach him a lesson.... or badly hurt him ok i won't badly hurt him i'll just give him a presentation on howz he been acting and how he should get his act together and how GRi will turn to Tabiri and how his jackassness is effecting the group dynamics.... :D

[stupidefleurk]

AM I the only one who doesn't hate Ji ?lol
It's obvious he hides something and suffers just as much as seungri (but I still wonder what is his problem ?XD)He's a huge douchebag but I feel for him 8(

I want Seungri to be stronger,well more responsive .It's time for him to return the pain,he can't stay like that forever (and hurt poor tabi ;_;)

LOL I wait for this chapter like a stalker,I wait I wait but I can't wait X_X I want to know what will happen *wait wait wait*XD

ps:oh and thank you for the g-ri smex keke

[papersanguine]

I should really throw in some redeeming quality for Ji otherwise people might just start to fly to Korea and kick some leadah ass. :?

And a stronger ri, you ask? Well bb i have something in store for you!

[vaneszikkipower]

It's not possible, i'm sure i'll kill Jiyong before the end of this story!
Seungri ah please just slap him, show him he cannot use you as he wants, please just react!!!

[papersanguine]

I love your icon, btw. It's smexy. And i agree. Ri needs some attitude in the near future!

[ninja_starshine]

WHY DO YOU DO THIS TO ME. I REALLY WANT TO STAB JIYONG NOW. that should give you a good indication of how convincing your writing is. the whole smut scene was so painful and heartbreaking ;____;

Seungri glanced at Jiyong and missed the way Seunghyun’s eyes closed in defeat.

“How is it that you manage to ruin everything you touch, Jiyong?”

And as he looked in the mirror and practiced his smile it didn’t matter that no matter how many times he tried it just didn’t reach his eyes anymore.

those lines ♥ this being chaptered really builds the suspense.

[papersanguine]

::blush:: thank you! I keep building but i'm not totally sure where too...haha i probably shouldn't reveal that i'm not totally sure where i'm going with this, but at least you know it'll be a suprise!