Until the train arrives - 2min [1/1]

May 19, 2011 00:04


Until the train arrives | 2min | R | 1300+
au, angst,  | unbeta-ed, character death, suicide | promt used: picture

note: Witten for the 13th shawol_haven challenge. I don't know what makes me write character death all the time -.-, kind of unbeta-ed, I'll go through it tomorrow.

Minho and Taemin are waiting for the train to arrive and maybe everything would have been better if they would have met earlier. )

pairing: taemin / minho, rating: r

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shineecandy May 19 2011, 22:47:12 UTC
I don't know what happened to taemin in the past... but this is i don't really know how to put it... beautiful? crazy good? yeah something like that sounds right.

if only they've met sooner they've be able to maybe save each other's misery but then death in this case is their safe place.

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mariposa02 May 22 2011, 12:28:10 UTC
thank you very much. I'm glad you liked it ;)

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bopeep_achu May 20 2011, 14:32:35 UTC
;_____________;
luv ittttt

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mariposa02 May 22 2011, 12:28:28 UTC
thanks ♥

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Love it gyustine May 20 2011, 14:39:17 UTC
I like Angst,
character death ?
suicide ?

Are interesting...........

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Re: Love it mariposa02 May 22 2011, 12:28:49 UTC
thank you :D

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hongjinri May 21 2011, 18:52:51 UTC
Did Minho die too? This is so sad, but it's a good kind of sad.

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mariposa02 May 22 2011, 12:29:26 UTC
yep they died together :D thank you

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ummaa u_u ennxeli May 23 2011, 23:09:06 UTC
This was so calm and beautiful and tragic and terrible and horrendous at the same time. I even can't describe properly, just mixed feelings. I'm a little also working on something similar. Suicide is always a very difficult topic to write about. I have always believed in lessons in decisions like that - like don't solve a problem that might be temporary with a permanent solution. But I understand it nonetheless. There unfortunately ARE permanent things in life that can push one so far that it's not a life for that one. That said, kamsahamnidaa for this because it was so true to life, although it's a warning also, so that it shouldn't be an excuse to leave people. I mean, one person hurting you, shouldn't (although it so often so is) cancel out all that love they receive from many. Heh.. i guess this story just made me want to help Taemin just to see that. Pardon my random philosophy. xD ( ... )

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Re: ummaa u_u mariposa02 May 28 2011, 07:15:21 UTC
no I like your philosophy ;) thank you very much I'm glad you like dthis :D
(and sorry for not including Minho >.<)
thank you ♥

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