Comments | papillon02: Stay

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Stay - Onkey [1/1]

Sep 29, 2011 22:51

rating: pg-15, !request, pairing: onew / key

Comments 14

Spot for aitotchideto mariposa02 September 29 2011, 20:55:14 UTC

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Re: Spot for aitotchideto aitotchideto September 30 2011, 17:08:55 UTC

/incoherent

Re: Spot for aitotchideto aitotchideto September 30 2011, 17:19:00 UTC

i can't believe you did my prompt

this is so painfully beautiful. i think both kibum and jinki insanely loved each other too much for them to bear, so losing one of them wasn't really an option. this is sick ugh but so beautiful.

i love you ;~;

Re: Spot for aitotchideto aitotchideto September 30 2011, 17:21:10 UTC

“You haven’t come out of your little shell for months now Kibum, we’re worried.”

“You know that Onew needs me.”

Kibum can hear Jonghyun’s sigh and his stomach drops as he clenches his fists.

“I know he does Kibum,” he answers and he sounds so sad, so resigned, it makes Kibum frown.

i can actually feel my stomach drops just like what jonghyun felt asdlks

Thread 5

the_night_thief September 29 2011, 21:47:58 UTC

Onew, I am so disappointed in you. D: You and Key are so beautiful together, and your smile is magic, but then Key is always sad and ksfjdhgaskjfdhg you always end up being dead/hurting him/trying to kill him and I DO NOT APPROVE. *cries, clutches to Key*

mariposa02 September 30 2011, 13:05:44 UTC

/gives you tissues & hits Onew

tokki24 September 29 2011, 23:58:59 UTC

I love OnKey (so much!)
But honestly I don't really get along with this kind of story line, it's quite confusing for me,.
I only get that Onew's dead n Kibum just want to fulfil the promise that they'll never leave each other.. Other than that it's quite confusing.. ㅠㅠ ㅠㅠ

mariposa02 September 30 2011, 13:07:12 UTC

awww I'm sorry that the storyline is condusing you >.< if you want to I can explain(?) and I'm sure I'll be wrting less confusing Onkey soon :D

belintuchiha September 30 2011, 06:16:34 UTC

as long as they end together, both dead or alive, everything's good ;____; cause onkey needs to be together ♥
even if that means kibum needs to kill himself DX I don't agree on suicide but if it gets them together and happy then GO WITH IT!! XD
this is really beautiful btw ;_;♥

mariposa02 September 30 2011, 13:09:20 UTC

thank you very much ♥

emptycavern September 30 2011, 09:52:06 UTC

This is really beautiful, I like it a lot :)

mariposa02 September 30 2011, 13:09:49 UTC

thank you!