Pyramid Dares Level 2 - "Island"

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Title: Close
Author: villanelle_koi
Pairing: Zexion/Demyx
Prompt: Island
Rating: Hm. PG-13, maybe?
A/N: For this drabble, I went and experimented with a different style. It turned out . . . . okay, I guess. And the whole island thing is totally metaphorical, hell, I'm not even sure how the hell it got in there.

Comments

[arson_attrition]

Nyanya~ I already told you my feelings. <3

But, again. I love the metaphors and how you can write Zexion even though you're the Demyx type.

And the ending was just ... gah. Cute.

[anonymous]

Your Demyx is so cute >_>

[readingchick]

Nyah, I know you love your reviews, but I never know what to say... Well, that I haven't said before. Your drabbles always give me these wonderful little mental images, most of them cutesy in nature.

Yay for experimentation with new styles! This is certainly different to your usual drabbles. Demyx is talking in riddles! o.o Be afraid, Zexion, be very afraid.

Anyway, you are getting impatient, no doubt. So, you know I love you and your writing turns me into an envious puddle of goo, right? If not, well, you know now. =P

Great work!

[minaclueless]

Demyx reminds me of the Cheshire Cat in this one.
<3

[neffervescent]

"We spin a sugar-sweet little fairy tale they can never find . . . . huh, that's not pretty at all."

LOVE that line.

This was quite a mimsy-like piece. Very pretty and whimsical. I liked it. The characterization is so wonderful! :D

Your drabbles always make me happy.