Fiction (Update)

[paranoid_fridge]

So after my personal odysse through Yunnan (one of those days I'll find a way to upload those pics to lj, screwy connection or not) left me with enough time - about 72h on trains - to work on the next chapter, here it is. Personally, I don't like the first part of it very much - but the later part turned out as I wanted it to. ^^

Title: What

Comments

[lingou]

YOU LITTLE JERK YOU. YOU JUST HAD TO, DIDN'T YOU?
No cookies for you!!!! You and Jun Mochizuki have been brainstorming together haven't you? Well, I'm calling your bluff!!!!! I choose Magical!Boy Tezuka/March Hare Phoenix Down!!! Your tragic plot-line suffers 394,832,675,243 HP damage! Your tragic plot-line faints! Fuji receives 500 EXP and wakes from his-- deadness!!! Evil?!Demon!MagicalBoy!Tezuka breaks the 4th wall and bops you over the head with his Demon Fist of Great Righteousness!

Very little sympathy for Tezuka happening right now. I mean, srsly, what if Evil!Crazy!Dead-Woman-But-Not beats Fuji back to his Not!Dead body?? It's gotta be hard to win a spiritual footrace with a hole through your lung. And again, is it really too much effort to pick up your NOT!DEAD boyfriend and carry him out of the crumbling dimension?! I mean, with the way he was losing blood and apparently non-corporeal, there's no way he would've been heavy!!!

Yumiko's gonna smack him so hard Fuji's soul is going to rattle out. And Tezuka's soul...? Well,

[lingou]

oh wait, CALLING IT ON WEIRD MAGICAL ARTIFACT ASS-PULL. Because I don't think you're above that. But hey, if it gets Fuji back, I'll settle. Though I'd really like to see Tezuka get hit by some bad karma. What's the spiritual equivalent of a freight train?

[lovefujitez]

Mona-chan........*frustrated* don't let Fuji die! I know you won't that's why I am pleading for the next chapter to post soon!

NO way! I hope Yumiko is just playing the part and letting the medical person convince himself that he is saying something that made sense...oh dear...I am so incoherent because Fuji is still dead(fake Ihope!)

Looking forward to your next post....

great work as always!

and I finally caught up with my reading....yay!

[paranoid_fridge]

^^ You know me, I like happy endings. They might just take some time to come around. Tezuka is certainly going to try his very best to make sure Fuji doesn't die, and Yumiko is going to get over her anger at Tezuka as well.

Other characters however... *evil laughter*

Thank you for reading!

[chibikaoruchan]

O__________O;

And here I thought everything's calmed down... I feel more actiong soon. I hope I'm not wrong!

Will continue reading.