Not Entirely Human Error - Part 11

[parkermonster]

 Hooray for me! Less than a month between updates! Sheesh!

TITLE:  Not Entirely Human Error - Part 11
AUTHOR:  parkermonster
PAIRING:  House/Chase
RATING:  PG-13+
WARNINGS: Major angst alert!! Also, your mom would wash out your mouth with soap for using some of the language here. 
NOTES:  Spoilers for Human Error, and everything that leads up to that

Comments

[shady76]

excellent chapter! I love that Chase is standing up for himself.

[parkermonster]

Thank you! IMO, Chase may roll with the punches much of the time, but he can stand up for himself when he needs to.

[chocolate_frapp]

Excellent. I miss ROF. typical of Fox, they got rid of him and he was the ONLY interesting one of the potential noob ducklings, IMHO.

[parkermonster]

Thanks, and no kidding about ROF! I'm just praying that TPTB spent the strike reading the fansites and paying attention. More Chase! And bring back Henry!

[chocolate_frapp]

Chase used to irritate the hell out of me when I first started to watch House but now I think he's pretty damn interesting as a character. I wouldn't want to actually hang out with him but i think it's interesting to see what made him tick.

[water333]

Love it; but a tad bit too short.Hope too see more of them in future chapters; and sooner too..

[parkermonster]

Glad you're liking it, and don't worry - this conversation isn't over yet. Chase just needed a little fresh air. Besides, these guys are just starting to interact.

[tierry_leoine]

Ohhh...great stuff, like always. Real, raw and emotional (to end the alliteration).

I hope we'll see the next part soon *makes puppy dog eyes*

[parkermonster]

Thank you so much! The next part is also busy being hard to write. The good news, I guess, is that I have several later chapters already written, so at some point I will theoretically catch up with myself. 8-D

[ladymurha]

This chapter had rolling on the floor laughing and consequently nearly crying from all that angst. Seriously. Not that it isn't stuff that I haven't figured out before in House/Chase terms, but you wrote it in a very powerful way. The dialogue was very natural, as well, and I think that really added to the strength of this chapter. Esp the angst department. Excellent stuff.

[parkermonster]

I'm glad the humor came out before the angsty stuff, which is so hard to write. I love writing dialogue, but it's a slow process; I have to 'hear' the characters say it, and sometimes they're too busy (or something) to come out and play.

Thanks for reading!