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[pateshie]

title a lot like love
count ~5000
a/n i wrote this because i wasn't around in ficdom before 2011 and i never got to try my hand at the teach me how to kiss, are we friends or are we more, awkward first love trope. continuing from that, this is canon and set pre 2010.

Comments

[nadianadeen]

“Jinki,” the other boy says roughly. “I’m not that clueless, you know. I admit I didn’t know why I came to you but I figured it out along the way. I’m not like you, hyung, I’m not mature,” - Jinki snorts at that - “and brave and I kind of build too many fairytales in my head, or so Kibum says, but I’m here now, okay?” Jonghyun squeezes his
hand.

This bring tears to my eye, so content to be able to read this and it's jongyu for godsake! Thank you for keep writing this beautiful thing.

[rallyingpoint]

Ok blowjob first before sex so Jjong can satisfy all his curiosities.

This is beautiful. It's worth it losing sleep over this perfect Jongyu. Thank you.

[taylormercury]

Aria. ARIA. THIS IS. YOU ARE. THEY ARE AKDHSAKDHAJS

[diamondacequeen]

I think you did great for this theme of fiction! I also think you picked a good pair to work with. Jinki was setting himself up for heartbreak, and he knew it. I honestly thought this was going to be one of those "but they don't live happily ever after" fics. I'm glad that Jonghyun reciprocated. It wasn't, like, over done and drawn out. Jinki let it out, and Jonghyun just said okay. I liked that a lot because it made this more realistic in my opinion. Not everyone has some grand beginning of a relationship, and I feel like this could still translate into something other than a "official" relationship. I really liked it though. It was funny when it was supposed to be, my heart broke for Jinki, and I also felt for Jonghyun. They were both lonely, and they happened to figure out a way to be not-so-lonely together.

[minsunshine]

cries because this is so so beautiful omg ;____; i have a lot of of feelings for band!au jongyu and the way you wrote them and laid out their story.... i'm so happy this didn't have an angsty ending, with jjong saying he didn't love jinki the way jinki loved him but this kind of sweet open-ending... i loved it uwu

also my biggest weakness is awkward first love tropes so being able to see it in jongyu and in band!au form... you seriously got me there ;_____;

thank you for sharing <333