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[pateshie]

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a/n my old year's resolution is to finish all my wips. this one has been with me for months now, we were especially good friends between 2-3AM. and for some reason it kind of turned out like jongkey: the lana del rey video. i apologize for that, i really do.

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[saranghaepperu]

this is brilliant, it sort of dances on the surface of things but treads in the deep at the same time and in all it's beautifully tragic... ;__;

Key makes Jonghyun want to do cheesy things like pick him up and spin him around. He’s never felt this way before and it’s exhilarating. Waking up to Key’s kitten tongue on his neck or watching the sun play with his hair - these are things he’s waited to see his whole life.
I am in love with this paragraph. These kind of things, I didn't even realize that I just typed the same expression that stands in the line above but hahaha, brings me to tears simply because of how beautiful it is, to even imagine... ;_;

Jonghyun falls in love with the way Taemin’s eyes shine when he looks at Minho.
This was so endearing, I swear.... <3

The last time he sees them is through his tears.
nonononoo ;;;___;;; gahh

[pateshie]

aaah, i must confess, that was a bit of wishful thinking on my part. i feel like all of us have this stereotypical image of love that's very personal and different for everyone, and in my head, this was jonghyun's definition of that perfect, storybook romance. i'm really glad you liked it but you must not cry! ♥

[hautekeyture]

your writing is absolutely gorgeous. you're one of my favorite... this is gonna sound weird but like "boutique" writers? writers that don't publish very often but when they do it's so incredibly worth it. you have little details and phrases like watching the sun play with his hair - these are things he’s waited to see his whole life. that paint such beautiful pictures. and yeah it's a little video-montage-in-a-music-video-y but that's a good thing; it's vivid and beautiful. idk man, it moved me.

[pateshie]

wow, thank you so much. that's so incredibly sweet and encouraging, i'm happy this was something that you enjoyed and got something out of. ♥

[anonymous]

reading this was like listening to soft, trilling music in dreams - it's so beautiful and you keep trying to catch it, trying to put it down in memory perfectly, because you know, somehow, that it's going to end.
this was so sad and gorgeous and i'm going to re-read this a lot of times. ;~;

your work never disappoints, it's always so well-put and well-written. mgmgmgg you're great ;o;

[pateshie]

aaah, i wish you weren't anonymous so i could be sure you've seen this but thank you so, so much for this lovely comment. ♥

[anonymous]

Incredible points. Outstanding arguments. Keep up the amazing spirit.

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[anonymous]

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