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Feb 09, 2014 00:01

title let's talk about sex
count 4363
a/n i hope it's not too bad and can keep you entertained for a few minutes!

Let's talk about you and me. )

pairing: jonghyun/onew, fandom: shinee, type: one-shot

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princesalunar February 9 2014, 04:34:56 UTC
omg, I loved it! I was dying when Jonghyun was reading the message xD Kibum is hilarious. I would love to have that video of Jjong *0* hahahaha

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life_not_knife February 9 2014, 06:24:04 UTC
ksjnfssfnjksdfnf!!!!! Woah.... I don't often read Jongyu but something about this called me in and I am glad I read it. Woah, that was awesome, I loved the build up and how Jinki is so confident and shy all at the same time... I loved how Jonghyun was both cute and sexy and I loved Key's meddling. hahahahaha! Perfect... really great story, thanks for writing and sharing.

Xx L xX

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nadianadeen February 9 2014, 08:20:34 UTC
'I want to kiss him goodnight and fuck him good morning for the rest of our high school lives if he’d let me' -
I love all the cheese in here! So happy and ecstatic to see you post something in here!!

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taylormercury February 9 2014, 10:58:59 UTC
NOT TOO BAD? NOT. TOO. BAD. Aria, what is wrong with you, this is great ;~;

This was really cute, and had some lovely sweet moments in it, and some really hilarious moments (oh my god the sex advice, the sex questions, Jonghyun's wary "with lady bits?" became hilarious in hindsight, Jinki's confessional letter dkanfadkam oh my god)

I really really enjoyed this!! How they became friends, how Jinki soon realised how much he liked Jonghyun, how cute they were together, and the ending oh my god the ending what even djvbskvhakdh

Also, Kibum and Taemin were excellent, hilarious additions. Taemin and the crisps. Everything Kibum said, ever. And this line, the best line in all of everything ever: kiss him goodnight and fuck him good morning

I love them, I love this, I love you, this was great!!! ♥♥♥

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rallyingpoint February 9 2014, 12:41:54 UTC
Have I ever told you I loved your fics? I don't think I have, but now I finally come out of hiding. You are my most favorite fanfic author ever ever. ;_;

One of these days, I'll comment on every single one of your fics that blew my mind. I have a list.

Anyway, this fic is a new addition to those favorites. idek what exactly I like about this... maybe everything? That it is so subtle, so simple, no dramas. Jonghyun and Jinki and everyone are completely chill and enjoying their life and doing their best. idk

/sorry for the quality of comment. Look how incoherent you make me

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pateshie April 4 2014, 20:20:08 UTC
thank you so much for this comment, it was so sweet and it really made my day! ♥

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