[FIC] I Wait For the Day (H50, Danny, Steve, Rachel)

[pavlovs_kitten]

Title: Wait For the Day
Author:Lilas
Characters/Paring: Steve, Danny, Rachel; Danny/Steve pre-slash; sort of Danny/Rachel?
Genre: Gen, Pre-slash
Rating: PG
Warning/Spoilers: Coda 1x23
Summary: Steve comes to a decision about Danny and his relationship with Rachel. Companion Piece to Late At Night (When All the World Is Dreaming) (I recommend

Comments

[kitmerlot1213]

This was damn painful but in a rather beautiful way!

I like that you have Rachel realizing that she never should have divorced Danny but now she has to live with the choices she's made. And good for her for realizing how much Steve and Danny mean to each other.

I like that Steve's decided to lay everything out in the open and that he wants a relationship with Danny--now Danny just has to realize it too.

Great work on this :)

[jazzybabe56]

Oh dear! I hope there's more to come in this saga - poor Steve, poor Danny - they are both so hopelessly in love and confused.....

[abbeyrd62561]

I hope there is more to this it's a cliff hanger. I love the Rachel and Danny had that talk and you had her realize that Steve was now the one. Had her call for a meet with him and tell him they she made a mistake and for him not to make the same. I also like how Steve finally told Danny and then left . Poor Steve but poor Danny cause he told Rachel he can't do it again and I know like Steve does that Danny wants what Steve wants. there has to be more....great job.

[mangacat201]

Eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeek... not that I don't think Steve wasn't right doing what he did, but it still is sooooo hurty and angsty and weeeeeeeeee.