Girl!HSAU

[paytofay]

I have no idea when this is set. But I did it:|!

Title: Staring at the Rude Girls
Pairing: Girl!Sulu/Girl!Chekov
Summary: Genderbent HSAU (sort of)--Hikaru is a motorcycle mechanic and general bad girl; Pavla is a new immigrant who goes to shows when her parents think she's at synagogue. They totally hit it off, then totally get it on.
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Comments

[ilmatarlady]

I'm not really into femslash but this proved to me that as long as the characters are strong and believable and complex, that doesn't matter. ;)
I love your girls, they're well-rounded and yeah, I'll say it again, believable. I like Pavla's shyness and her acting completely like a sixteen year-old. Everything about this was perfect! :)
Only proves to me that Pavel & Hikaru belong together in any and all universes.

[paytofay]

Aww, thank you, it's really such a compliment that you'd read this despite not being too into girllove, heh
Thank you so much! And ohh I definitely feel the same way about them ♥ ♥

[cruelnovember]

Hikaru has always seemed so effortlessly sexy to me, and even more so in female form. I can imagine the sound of her voice so perfectly and and and the leather jacket, goddamn. :D

I like that girl!Hikaru is still taking care of Pavel and that they have this instant, easy connection that they probably don't even really think about at first, it just is and that's something I love about this pairing.

It's always interesting to see what changes and what doesn't in genderbending fics and most of the time it's surprisingly little. I love that. :) Like how Pavla is still very direct, asking Hikaru if Jamie (and omg it took me way too long to figure out she's Jim, FAIL) is her girlfriend...

“Hikaru, I think I love you. This is very serious.”

Gah I just love this fic so much I want to cry.

Also this: Hikaru kisses her in front of all of those people she doesn’t need reminds me of a song I love but it's in Finnish and I don't have the time to translate it right now! Maybe some day. :)I'm sorry for the rambly comment, I suck at feedback and

[paytofay]

:D I'm so glad girl!Hikaru was so awesome for you. and ahh yes sometimes I'm not so clear with it but I have to shove random characters in there, hahaha.

Awww thank you; I love that you enjoyed my word choice, and ahhh are you a finn yourself? Excuse me while I fetishize your nordic-ness hahaha

No your comment was totally awesome and thoroughly appreciated :D I hope to hear from you more; something tells me these to won't die off in my head very quickly :x

[cruelnovember]

Yes, I'm a Finn and I feel like a traitor drooling over Chekov and some Russian hockey players because we're supposed to haaaate the Russkies or something. :D

Please do keep writing more, I promise I'll be reading and squeeing over here even though I might not always comment.

[celemie]

GUH I AM DEAD! YOU HAVE KILLED ME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I AM IN LOVE WITH THIS STORY!!!!!!!

[paytofay]

Hahah THANK YOU!!!!!!!!!!!!! It's alays lovely to hear from you, lol

[cordelianne]

OMG, so the mere summary for this fit has me in a whirl of excitement! And reading it had me so excited that I was too inarticulate to comment but then couldn't fall asleep last night! This fic took me back in time to when I was 19-21 and going to see bands in the punk scene in Toronto - so *I* have decided your fic is set in the late '90s cause that's when I was in a very similar scene and you only had to spend a few bucks to see a show and we still had cassettes kicking around. I remember how all-boy it was and how exciting it was when girl bands played! So this fic had me wandering down memory lane remembering all the sleazy clubs and guys we used to have to deal with, how almost all of those clubs have closed down now and how I had a hot kiss with a girl outside of one of those clubs

[paytofay]

you couldn't fall asleep? ahh how flattering ahah <3 Yes I was thinking nineties myself! Ahh I envy your hot kiss experience. I could never talk to girls at shows D:

Hahah the bathroom lol, that was my version of a meet-cute ;___; I'm glad you liked Hikaru, because she was sort of this conception of everything I wanted to be as a teenager and I wanted her to be super cool and hot. Ohhh I wanted to include Jamie more so bad; maybe I'll do a sequel where they all hang out lol.

ahah I CAN'T REMEMBER where I got Spent Cocks from but I swear it was one of my friends' joke-names or something hahaha. That makeout paragraph was actually a late add-on, so I'm glad you enjoyed it:) and the bathtub is like, something I DREEEAMED of writing so I'm glad you enjoyed it!

Thank you so much; your comments are always lovely to get in my mailbox and I enjoy them sooo. This is for you: <3!

[imasupermuteant]

I just melted from the awesome that is this fic. I don't normally like genderswapped things but this. THIS. It's beautiful and sweet and such a perfect image of a lesbian relationship. *lovelovelove*

[paytofay]

Aww, thanks; I don't see myself doing an amazing amount of genderswap so I wanted this to be kind of DEFINITIVE, lol. Thank you so much for the read/comment<3