Eden (chapter 5)

[pe_gret]

Title: Eden
Author: pe_gret
Pairing:Tora/Saga; Shou/Hiroto
Chapter: 5/???
Genre: AU; Angst; Romance
Rating: PG-13
Synopsis: ”Can you imagine not having to wear a mask, being able to look in the mirror?”
Warnings: None;
Disclaimer: The story is mine; The characters are yet to be tamed.

Comments

[xme_chanx]

I'll comment properly on all of these tomorrow. 8D I like this, and I'm super-stoked to see Tora's plans. <3333

[k435y]

at the last sentence i was like YAY! then *scrolls down* AWW... T_T i totally loled when shou announced he was gonna marry pon. XD but i cant help but worry. is toras lair really worth it? D8 the txs bed scene was cute. 8D to stoop to the monsters level is justified? wouldnt you become just like them & hate yourself? o_O anyway please update soon? =) sorry for weird-looking comment. laptop dies when im on lj. ><;

[pe_gret]

I would think so, Tora's lair sounds cool!
Thank you! The comment looks good.

[seventh_hills]

It's morning here and this was the first thing I saw...... I NEED MORE! <#

[pe_gret]

More is to come soon, m'lady. :)

[reibubbles]

ah finally chapter 5! sorry for not commenting in your two previous chapters ><
the moment shou saw hiroto, he decided to marry him O.O i know tora mentioned that hiroto is shou's type in previous chap but i didn't think he decides to marry him the first he saw him. but, i like the idea 8D
the scene in the bed is really sweet >< the end! the end of this chapter! asdfghjkl please update soon! i wanna see saga's reaction after seeing tora's face for the first time >A<
btw, sorry for this long random comment XD

[pe_gret]

It's cool! :) And well, you have to take in consideration how immature and derpy Shou is. XD Along with the fact that he is dictator and is like "AND WHAT I SAY GOES"
Thank you so much. :3

[ext_1049017]

Yay! It was Hiroto! I love you!! <3

Hahahaha! I laughed out loud when Shou wants to marry Hiroto eventhough they were just met each other for the first time! Just the moment when he saw Pon's face! Kohara-sama can be funny sometimes. XD

Saga's gonna kill someone? Hope he's gonna be fine! (0.0)

I'm looking forward for the next chappy! (^_^)

[pe_gret]

Hiroto is perf. :D
Personally, Shou is my favorite. >w< He's cute!
Thank you!