Different kinds of smiles

[pe_gret]

Title: Different kinds of smiles---
Author: pe-gret~:sushi:
Pairing: Ruki x Kai
Bands Included:The GazettE; Ruki as narrator
Chapters: One-shot~
Genre: Romance, Drama
Rating: PG-15--
Synopsis: "It’d be pretty awkward to talk about it with all those fangirls out there, writing fan fiction about how gay all of us are and whatnot."

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Comments

[shinjimimura03]

RUKIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIII.....!!! NO!!! ...silly boy!! open your eyes!!! Its heart crushing how sometimes we miss chances right infront of our faces because we're not looking properly. Poor Yutaka.. i thought it might be Ruki cos Yutaka didnt know Ruki in Mcdonalds, so he obviously 'saw' him and was smitten enough to ask him, (a stranger) to sing, and all the while Ruki tried to ignore him and keep serving Yutaka waited there patiently weaiting for him to change his mind and give it a shot. I liked Yutaka's confidence back then..wish he still had it enough to confess to Ruki now. xx
i loved this, thank you very much. its such a shame we'll never know what might eventually happen,or if it never will.... but it was a brilliant oneshot. xx

[pe_gret]

I love how you took your time to write this~ its really quite sweet. :) Well, thank you and I'm glad you like it! :D Hehe, I left it at that because then it gives the reader time to imagine what could possibly happen. :)

[shinjimimura03]

Well, it was easy for me to think about it deeply as i went along, because you wrote so clearly and epressively that it was easy to see it as film running through my mind, rather than text sinking into my eyes.
I love the cliff hanger because i love something that leaves me thinking. just like films can do, when the credits are rolling i'm still sat there, spaced out, feeling emotion for what ive just watched, so i enjoyed that feeling from your story too.
i WANT to think about whats going to happen...but then the frustration comes hahaha cos i crave for it to be solved.
I'm a lurker who reads and comments once on a pink moon..but you really enticed me to say something, cos i really enjoyed your story. It was great to read.
I went to sleep thinking about it. thank you very much xxx

[pe_gret]

You're welcome~ And thank you sooooo much for reading and commenting. That last part of your comment made me feel special. C:

I'm really glad you liked it and I'm glad it was an easy read. I had a friend of mine read it but she had a hard time understanding so I was thinking of not posting it. D: Either way, I'm happy I did. and I love hearing feed back. :) You got the exact feel that I was aiming for and I'm proud. :D

[happykawaiiday]

WHAT THE....
you trollllll
i thought it'd be a good ending..but...what.
._.

WHERE'S THE REST OF THE STORY???
WHERE'S THE PART WEHRE RUKI FINALLY REALIZES THAT YUTAKA LOVES HIM AND THEN THEY KISS????

[pe_gret]

You see, that's what most people think from stories like these. They always think there is a good ending. Let me tell you something though, do you think there is ALWAYS happy endings in life? Has there always been happy endings in yours always?
You can't say completely. That's why I did this. To give something unexpected. XD

[happykawaiiday]

It was really unexpected .
XD

[pe_gret]

I love unexpected endings. ;)
Thanks for reading~ and commenting!

[vheira13]

I love the story! >w<
Though.. Are you sure it's just a oneshot?
Cuz, the ending was a total cliff-hanger! >

[pe_gret]

Thank you so much! And yes, it's a one-shot~ It was meant to be a cliff hanger so whoever reads it will think about what could have possibly happened. :)

[whatisair]

Woah.. It's quite an unexpected ending for me. I think i've been reading way too many happy endings, maybe that's why i got all frustrated at ruki. Sigh~
But really, how torturous for kai... And he'd gotten his hopes up high too, just too bad that he fell for the wrong person. x__x ohh one-sided love, how sad and lonely you are!
But i wonder if ruki actually knows, but just wants to see kai's smile slip off just for once. CRUEL~~~ smiling isn't all that bad... Better than sulking through your whole life! Smile a little, sulk a little. Have a good balance of everything xD

Overall WELL DONE i like this /sobs

[whatisair]

Oh and thank you very much for sharing this :)

[pe_gret]

Thank you so much for reading and commenting. ^^ :)
Hehe, yeah, I usually read a lot of happy stories...but I like to have something different. You know what I mean? :D My intention in this story is for having Ruki be kind of clueless, so Ruki deosn't really realize it until he sees Kai's smile fall. D:

[chimei_tekina]

pmg omg omg....i am in love (with this here fic <3) sill Takanori and lovestruck Yutaka. *sighs* it's all so perfect. you ABSOLUTELY MUST write more!!! or I'll never be able to sleep again xD

[pe_gret]

Baaaahhh~ I'm soooooo sorry~ ;A; But this is only going to be a one-shot. D: I'm going to be writing another story soon, it'll be in chapters though. It has the Uruha and Aoi pairing. Maybe some Ruki and Kai in there too~ maybe that'll help a bit? :)
Thanks for reading~ !