Comments | pearlstar178: ship's night

pearlstar178

ship's night

Feb 14, 2011 00:33

Prompt:7
Rating:PG
Warnings: none
Word Count:~2,000
Summary: Late at night Bones talks to /yells at Jim while he's in a coma.
A/N: The only thing I own are the typos. Which I guess is pretty impressive. (in perarlville everyone speaks and writes like captcha)

For Jim's POV please check out the AMAZING Baby,you can lay me down by the wicked ( Read more... )

Comments 20

blcwriter February 15 2011, 00:10:44 UTC

Oh, the heartache of this. So glad Jim woke up!

pearlstar178 February 19 2011, 20:56:50 UTC

Thank you for reading! I always liked my valentine's day with a good dose of heartache.

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pearlstar178 February 19 2011, 20:58:58 UTC

:) I think that Jim would appreciate the grumpiness. Thank you for reading!

secretsolitaire February 15 2011, 05:42:50 UTC

Aw, I love how you circled things back to the toothpaste. Lovely.

pearlstar178 February 19 2011, 20:59:31 UTC

Thank you! You're very kind. Thank for reading!

weepingnaiad February 16 2011, 03:02:10 UTC

Poor Bones! Glad that Jim finally woke up!

pearlstar178 February 19 2011, 21:02:01 UTC

Bones did have a rough holiday. Thank you for reading!

abigail89 February 16 2011, 17:00:24 UTC

DEspite the yelling, his love comes through. I've always told my kids that I yell at them because I care. It's when I stop yelling that they should become concerned.

Lovely.

pearlstar178 February 19 2011, 21:07:42 UTC

:) I love have loved ones who operate in the same way. It's the silence that doesn't mean anything good. I always thought of Bone's grumpiness or yelling as his expression of caring. Glad the love came through.