all the transparence (in the shades of red)

Jun 25, 2012 23:18


Title: all the transparence (in the shades of red)
Fandom/Pairing: The Avengers, Clint/Natasha
Rating: E
Word Count: 3939
Summary: It is not always about remaking, about reconstruction; sometimes it is just about trust.
Notes: First Avengers fic. Be gentle with me, darlings.
After New York, Natasha gives Clint a week to clear his head. )

fanfiction, avengers, intentional fanfiction, clint/natasha

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allisnow June 26 2012, 03:45:52 UTC
Oooh I really enjoyed this. And you brought Phil back to life *wibbles*

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kuhori_rei June 26 2012, 03:54:43 UTC
I am 100% convinced that Phil's alive. ONE HUNDRED PERCENT.

And thanks! :)

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beyondthepen June 26 2012, 05:24:49 UTC
This was so beautiful and perfect, I can't even.

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kuhori_rei June 27 2012, 00:33:03 UTC
Thank you!

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book_junkie007 June 26 2012, 06:54:58 UTC
You have nothing to worry about. This is absolutely fabulous.

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kuhori_rei June 27 2012, 00:33:21 UTC
Thanks :) I was definitely nervous, but things are certainly looking up!

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elzed June 26 2012, 10:18:10 UTC
Like riding a bicycle, clearly!

Lovely - beautiful language, intense emotion, and sweetly hot...

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kuhori_rei June 27 2012, 00:34:25 UTC
I guess it is! Thank you :)

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workerbee73 June 26 2012, 13:07:35 UTC
Oh my God I loved this, you have no idea. It feels like a whole lot of meta and headcanon poured out in fic form (and I mean that in the best possible way, as I'm a big fan of both). And Coulson lives. Of course he lives. Lovely touch.

I love how she's determined to reclaim what they have; I love his passivity and his trust. Love the way you paint their (established) relationship. And the sexin'? Hot and sweet and intense. Yes, pls.

But I think my favorite bit of all was this:

The color suits him, just like it suits her; they were born to be painted like this, vivid red like fresh-spilled blood ( ... )

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kuhori_rei June 27 2012, 00:37:51 UTC
Wow, what a detailed and thoughtful review! A lot of my own headcanon went into this, so I'm glad it worked well.

And of course Coulson lives! Coulson always lives.

I'm already working on another fic! :)

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