Well this took a turn for the worst. And I never got to cut one open.

How disappointing, I wanted to see what was in it.

Everyone alright?

As ridiculously blase this Maze is, compared to the last one (which was obnoxiously dangerous) it's like a walk in the park!

With really big flowers. Flowers again? Seems like this place has a complex.

I'm going to pick one~

NOOOOOOO!!!

[There is some brief banging and crashing before the sound of glass shattering.]

Stupid flowers! GIVE ME BACK MY SAKE!

Eh, good morning Paradisim.

[There's a soft yawn followed by a sleepy sigh accompanied by the creaking of bed springs.]

I didn't know I could sleep that long. [Mumbled] Guess I needed it.

Eh...Yuuko, I'm gonna have to put a hold on that sake I owe you. I kind of need it indefinitely for the next day. Or week.

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Can't fly above it, can't phase through the walls....

[A screech comes from somewhere behind her followed by the sudden sound of bare feet running, and breath coming in heavy pants. When she stops there's a sound, that can't be anything other than lightening striking.

There is silence for a moment then rustling before Urd speaks again.]They don't ( Read more... )

[Urd is sitting crossed legged outside her apartment building, in front of her is what looks like a cast iron cauldron. A sweet steam is wafting out of the pot while the goddess absently hums some pretty tune and occasionally stirs or adds new ingredients ( Read more... )

Well once you get past people gazing right through you like you're made of glass thing this place doesn't seem too terrible. [The sarcasm in her voice is suddenly a lot more noticeable.] It's down right cozy in my empty room ( Read more... )

[A click followed by rustling, then an amused hum.] Oh, Skuld would love this thing...[A pause while she turns the Cross and her thoughts over and over.] Sure it’d be in pieces about two minutes after she got her hands on it, but she’d love it.

...Oh. It's on.

[Now speaking directly into the device.] Hey! Where am I? This certainly isn't Japan, ( Read more... )

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