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petetucker

The Leaf

Oct 09, 2006 15:06

The Leaf

I think it thought it had more time
To dangle with the swinging vine
But then the branch released its grip
And on the breeze it dived and dipped

Slicing straight through crisp atmosphere
It headed south like a soul tear
Not knowing where to next call home
Evicted from where it was sewn

Looking up towards the sun's gaze
Still blushing from past ( Read more... )

Comments 4

GREAT POEM victory_85 October 9 2006, 07:24:53 UTC

Really like this poem...There is a deeper meaning beyond the leaf :)

Re: GREAT POEM woolies_gal October 10 2006, 04:34:35 UTC

hey great stuff pete you always inspire me with your fantastic imagery i wonder where you get your inspiration from I wish I could be like you you are like the best poet ever!!!!!!But I am left with a question about the poem can you smoke the leaf? Did Eve smoke it ?

Re: GREAT POEM petetucker October 10 2006, 04:51:22 UTC

No but I think you smoked something this morning though Alicia. You have had a loopy day.

Re: GREAT POEM woolies_gal October 13 2006, 03:22:03 UTC

blame the english c and t assignment and the shit we have gone through to write the script together for thurs lol