Title: Rawhide
Author: PetiteMiel
Pairing: Jack/Ennis
Rating: NC-17(eventually)
Warning: Contains harsh language, violence, m/m sexual encounters.
Disclaimer: All characters from Brokeback Mountain belong to Ann Proulx. I am just borrowing them and make no money from their use. No copyright infringement is intended. All other characters are mine
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Like many here, i love the slow build-up you have for Jack and Ennis. Their mutual "admiration" for each other, the barely contain desire... and all the stolen glances... so sweet.
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Thanks for the comments.
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Thanks, Marie
P.S. I love Charlie!
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I'm really glad the details are adding to the story and not overwhelming it. I definitely didn't want it to become a "How to work on a ranch" handbook just wanted to give it the necessary realism to make it work.
Charlie is just a teddy bear underneath all that grissel.
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You know I didn't really think of that scene with them sleeping as mirroring the dozy embrace but I see what you mean with regards to the "Sexless Hunger". They definitely have that and I'm glad you liked the way the scene played out.
***is there trouble ahead***
There's always trouble ahead but you'll just have to wait to find out what kind. ;)
Thanks for reading and continuing to comment. Good to know I'm doing this right.
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Glad you think the song worked and as always thanks for the feedback.
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