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Rawhide Chapter 6

Apr 28, 2007 18:17

Title: Rawhide
Author: PetiteMiel
Pairing: Jack/Ennis
Rating: NC-17(eventually)
Warning: Contains harsh language, violence, m/m sexual encounters.
Disclaimer: All characters from Brokeback Mountain belong to Ann Proulx. I am just borrowing them and make no money from their use. No copyright infringement is intended. All other characters are mine ( Read more... )

rawhide, au!au

Comments 23

jbg1 May 1 2007, 08:41:05 UTC

ok, I have read your story three times now, there's just smth about it, I really like how both boys are feeling the attraction and the feelings for each other, so sweet! I really like young Jack and Ennis falling-in-love stories. I'm really looking forward to the next chapters!! Thanks for this,

petitemiel May 1 2007, 18:34:10 UTC

Thank you very much. I'm glad you liked it well enough to read it once let alone three times. I'm glad you like the way it's shaping up.

Thanks for the feedback. I always appreciate it.

neverdone39 May 3 2007, 09:05:20 UTC

I like all the details about the work, makes the story very vivid.
And the slow build-up is so sweet, as are their thoughts about each other.

Ennis dared to reach out brushing the hair off Jack’s forehead, letting his hand continue on to gently caress his cheek. Then leaning forward, his face in Jack’s hair he breathed deep taking in the musky scent of sweat and grass and horses.

“Beautiful.” He whispered.

Hmmmm, I wonder how deep Jack was really sleeping..... since he said later he wonders if he had gotten any sleep at all....

The above quoted was lovely, but my favourite part was Ennis reaching out and running his hand through Jack's hair before he could stop himself from it.

The two new guys are spelled t r o u b l e, I know it. But somehow I don't think for Ennis and Jack in specific, but for all the men and the cattle.

And Charlie has been cold a time or two in his life, eh? Who would have thought it. I had rather guessed Bull and KC know a thing about keeping each other warm. BTW: I always read KE instead of KC, lol.