Rawhide Chapter 12

[petitemiel]

Title: Rawhide
Author: PetiteMiel
Pairing: Jack/Ennis
Rating: NC-17(eventually)
Warning: Contains harsh language, violence, m/m sexual encounters.
Disclaimer: All characters from Brokeback Mountain belong to Ann Proulx. I am just borrowing them and make no money from their use. No copyright infringement is intended. All other characters are mine

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RE: Rawhide CHAPTER 12

[whrson_btch]

Wow this is so damn good!! I love the fact Jack now has an opportunity to face his father as a man not as a scared little boy!! Ennis feeling so strongy about Jack's daddy is just another indication of their deepening friendship.

I'm relieved that Jack has told Ennis 'bout Billy, least they can both monitor the situation and look after each other!!

Jack playing with Ennis under the table was so adorable...poor Ennis was so flustered!!

"Hell I aint stopped thinkin' on ya for more than a second since I met ya Ennis" This was such a gorgeous revelation from Jack!!

Thanks, this is a terrific read... can't wait for the next update!!!

Rawhide

[cwby30]

Afternoon

Re: Rawhide

[petitemiel]

whrson_btch, cwby30 I'm glad you both liked the chapter.

I think it's important J/E be on the same page if their relationship is to go any further so talking about Billy was a must and while Charlie's no danger to them Ennis needed to realize that the honesty thing has to be a two way street. it's not about him protecting Jack but about them looking out for one another.

cwby30 I don't know about a sequel yet as I still have a way to go before this one is through. I wouldn't rule it out though. :)

[jbg1]

Mmmmm good story! I am really enjoying this and thanks for the frequent updates. ok, I don't want to be a fly in the ointment, but.... in some parts of the US, at that time, (New York State, Minnesota, South Dakota being three of them I have heard this said of), a man's labour was owed to / owned by his father until he reached the age of majority (21). Soooo, is OMT going to drag Jack back to his pitiful ranch, and break up a beautiful friendship?? Anyway that is what I have read, I can't swear by it.....

Labor laws.

[petitemiel]

jbg1 I'm not really sure what laws would have been in place governing OMT's right over Jack. It is one aspect of the times I really haven't researched. I suppose it's possible he might have some right to "claim him" as it were but don't worry jack is going on that cattle drive.

Thanks for the comments. As always, they are much appreciated.

[onefreetoroam]

OMG, can you imagine how difficult it would be to ignore something so hot sitting right up next to you!!

Even as watchful as Ennis still is - it's good to see that he's a little more willing that what they got is "something".

Not sure I'd want to use a physician who's office is right next to the undertaker. LOL

Certainly would be better to have a "peppermint" taste than a "baking soda".

So glad that Ennis was there to provide Jack some support - even if it's just being there for him.

Thanks for the update.

[petitemiel]

Yeah Ennis is slowly letting down his guard. His desire is too strong for him to resist and who can blame him. Jack is such a little scamp rubbing on him like that. I know it would get my heart pumping.

Not sure I'd want to use a physician who's office is right next to the undertaker. LOL

Yes and considering they were both beside the restaurant, I'd have been wary of eating there as well.

I have to agree on the peppermint vs. baking soda thing but back then they only had a couple things available for dental hygiene and baking soda seems to have been the most common choice. I'm just glad to know they are cleaning their teeth at all as it wasn't really a priority in those days.

[testa_dura]

I caught up on this story recently and I'm really enjoying it. Quite the rollicking tale!

[petitemiel]

Thanks, I'm glad you took the time to read and that you are enjoying it.