Big Boys Don't Cry, Unless Their Whole Lives Are Crashing Down Around Them [standalone]

Jul 30, 2007 14:30

            Patrick smiled, “It’s nice . . . to be able to talk to everyone again.” He took a drink from the water bottle sitting right behind him on the bar, “I feel like I’m back in the loop.”

“You were never out of it, ‘Trick. Most of us were just scared for you, I know I was.”

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jwalkercameo, pxp, fobfic

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lifexisxtragic July 30 2007, 23:48:17 UTC
That was the best fic I've read in a long time.
Gorgeous.
Everything just flowed, and ugh.
I think you killed me with your talent.

Congrats on a great story :]

-Jess

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pfor July 31 2007, 00:35:42 UTC
I'm glad that you liked it!
Thank you so much!
That really made my day.
I was like *squee!FLAIL*

I really appreciate that.
<3

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This is Your Heart Beating Faster vanishingdream July 31 2007, 00:49:20 UTC
You never cease to amaze me, m'dear.

Sorry I didn't comment earlier.

You should seriously try out for Creative Writing at the Fine Arts Center.

Patrick without a voice is like me without a pen...or my ring... O_O

Some day I'll stop being lazy and post some of my fics.

PeteXPatrick=A Favorite

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Re: This is Your Heart Beating Faster pfor July 31 2007, 01:10:15 UTC
*glomps*

I would, but I'm in visual arts right now. if it doesn't work out (I wanna apply for the Governor's School, too. I might apply in creative writing and visual arts) at the gov's school or at FAC in visual arts I might apply for Creative Writing.

I know, it was really sad to write.

And you should, I wanna read some!

pxp = MY OTP LYKE SRSLY.

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xgunnedlilies July 31 2007, 03:35:02 UTC
First off, I must say, I had to download the song after I read this fic. And I've been playing it on repeat all day; you're right, it is good. And it made me happy that I'm not the only person who puts songs on repeat while writing a fiction inspired by it. But beyond that, this was amazing. I felt emotions bubbling up inside me and I haven't gotten that in a fiction for a while now; it made me giggle like a fangirl. And I, for some bizarre reason, like voiceless!Patty. His angst made me sad, and odd as I am, I liked the sadness. But seriously if the man had no voice, I'd probably kill myself or the world around me. He's voice is like honey, it's so good.

This was amazing. :] ♥+!

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Damn fine! seraph05 July 31 2007, 04:36:48 UTC
I loved this fic! gosh i would never have thought of something as brilliant as Patrick losing his voice...AS A STORY LINE THAT IS!!! *dies at the thought of it being a reality* And you carryed it out very well, it was cute how patrick got his voice back and it make my heart squeeze when patrick was suffereing at the begining. Very well done! so going in my memories!

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ffwarqueen July 31 2007, 06:43:56 UTC
Wow I absolutely loved this fic, I've never read one about Patrick losing his voice *thumbs up* <3

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