{one-shot} Please, don't love.

[phantomizedacid]

Please, don't love.
→ Jonghyun/Key; PG-16
Heartbreak will surely come.
Sequel to Use me, when you want to abuse me.
Side story: You won't let me love you.

Comments

[ontokki]

Yes, I agree. Jjong better be a man or we'll stick Onew after him!
Thank you so much for reading ;_;♥ it's in the making!

[hp_groupie]

OMG. SWEET. : )

YAY! Keep writing more of this. I also LOVE that it has linked stories

Tbh, I'm not satisfied with this, but I have no idea how else to write it :\

*overachiever*

[ontokki]

fjdasf thank you so much for you comment (and all your previous comments♥♥♥) it really means a lot to me.

ahh i sort of am one :\ maybe i felt like that since it was 4 am XD

[anonymous]

I love the sequel,sur it's still a bit sad but in this chapter we can see that Jjong is in love with Kibum instead of the previous one.

And I think it's much more a happy ending you wrote!

- If he could, he’d give Key away to Minho - a better candidate as a lover. However, Jonghyun can’t. Key should stay his, always and forever - this is one of the many proofs of Jjong's love!I'm just happy with that! :)

good job!(and sorry for my mistakes but english is not my first language)

[ontokki]

Thank you for reading omg and English is not even your first language. Your support means a lot!
And yess Jjong is in love :'D

[jecca_o9]

WHY SO ANGSTY WOMAN /CRIES

A few minor errors, if I may point them out :)
What one gives, one expect something in return.
It's expects. And it'd probably sound better if it's 'When' not 'What'?

Key was a bit bitterer
Key was a bit more bitter. :)

I LOVE THIS STORY SO FUCKING MUCH LUXI YOU DON'T EVEN KNOW.

Key only gets to talk to Jonghyun in his dreams.
/CRYING

[ontokki]

fdslfa Thank you Jecca. I knew I needed a beta, but nobody's awake @ 4AM XD

IT'S OK. ALL THE ANGST IS GONE (i think). thank you again ;_;

[jecca_o9]

No problem bb. <3 I could beta for you anytime. Since you're in NY 4am for you is 4pm for me. XD

Broken!Minkey.. Left hanging Jongkey ;-; I demand fluff to make it all better. ROFL

Srsly though, this fic is ♥. A bit of an abrupt ending but ♥ nonetheless.

[siaht]

My heart is still tight inside my chest ;__; *and I've read this a couple hours ago*

It ended too soon imho, but I'm probably just too carried away by it. I really wanted to know what happens, but since you left a leeway to our imagination, I'm deliberately imagining an epilogue where Jonghyun realizes it's useless denying what he feels, and that Key can surely keep him from being heartbroken. Of course he will tell Key just how much and how irremediably he loves him, and for the first time they'll make love in stead of having merely carnal sex.

So yeah, happy ending for me ^^/

ILYSFM just so you know. ♥

[ontokki]

jdaosdf I feel like it ended too soon too, but I couldn't get anymore out of me @_@'

Buuuut, your ending is EXACTLY what I had in mind. I just didn't want to write it xD But yes, happy ending for us~~~

♥♥♥