{series} please call me and say... | three

[phantomizedacid]

please call me and say...
→ Jonghyun/Key; PG-13
I feel wonderful because I see the love light in your eyes.
{I suggest listening to Jonghyun sing First Time while reading.}
ONE | TWO
☇Credits: Here

Comments

[hp_groupie]

Besides being a perv and wanting 'more' between these two (lol I'm bad now, I know D: )...I LIKED IT! Very cute. n_n

[ontokki]

lmao kekeke i'll give more :'D
thank you<3

[hp_groupie]

*waits patiently* : )

[r_hr_maniac]

phone sex or maybe some phone-sexual-flirting would sound good just about now.

[ontokki]

i agree. lol, it's coming up ;D

[siaht]

I wish I could have stayed up to read this right when you finished ;-;

It's short but I love it. And if they're going to meet again now then I just can't wait for the next chapter @o@!!!!

AND THE SONG, OMG, SO BEAUTIFUL /sobs

[ontokki]

Ahh it's ok♥

lmao everybody's demanding sex now XD so ugh next time they meet, uhh yea 8D

YES I KNOW RIGHT. Isn't it perfect for the scene ;_;

[siaht]

Everyone will always demand sex, but I think it'll be a little rushed if that happens this soon in the story... they barely know each other, and unless the next chapter is epic long, if you try to fit it all in one go *they becoming more intimate, falling in love and finally having sex, which doesn't necessarily needs to happen in this order lol* it'll feel very precipitated. That's just IMHO, of course I'd appreciate smut, it's just that this fic has so much potential to be well developed - and I know for a fact you can do it.

In any case I'll only love it ♥

[mnol_heart]

i agree. sex is good, but build up/development is also good :D

[silent_shout1]

<3.
I wanted them to have sex on that beanch, but maybe next time!
x

[ontokki]

lmao XD
that will definitely come :3

[jecca_o9]

/HEAD HITS DESK.

YOU EVIL WOMAN. EVIL. ASDLKFLKA:DSKASLDFADSFL:W just when I was all EEEEEEEE THERE'S GONNA BE MORE FLIRTING AFTER JEALOUS KEY AND JONGHYUN DENYING AND THEN AND THEN /SOBS

[jecca_o9]

also, ILU and you know that. Hope you feel inspired soon <3

[ontokki]

LMAO LOL GOTTA LEAVE CLIFFHANGERS. IT'S MY JOB TO BRING BACK READERS LOL
♥