{series} please call me and say... | three

Aug 11, 2009 22:00

please call me and say...
→ Jonghyun/Key; PG-13
I feel wonderful because I see the love light in your eyes.
{I suggest listening to Jonghyun sing First Time while reading.}
ONE | TWO
☇Credits: Here

you sure you’re not on some sort of drugs? )

!fanfic, !series, p: jonghyun/key

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michi_michuu August 12 2009, 15:36:55 UTC
YAAAAAAAY THAAAANK YOOOOU. I've been waiting for this ♥
Ahh, this was lovely :D
Key laughing at Jonghyun... so cute xDDDD.
Take your time on the next part! No need to hurry for us xD.

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ontokki August 13 2009, 02:35:24 UTC
I'm sorry it was took so long DX
Thank you for reading ;_;♥

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mnol_heart August 12 2009, 19:53:25 UTC
this story is so cutee~

i really like the way you use the text message format combined with real life too. and they always amuse me haha, especially their emoticons haha ~o~

good luck on the continuation. hwaiting!! :D

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ontokki August 13 2009, 02:27:01 UTC
eee thank you so much♥

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juliusnishi August 12 2009, 20:13:47 UTC
ASDHASLDASKDGALKSDGLKH
awesome. Please write more aljfhskdghfl
♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥

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ontokki August 13 2009, 02:22:42 UTC
:'D definitely will!
thanks for reading♥~

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meggayi August 12 2009, 20:41:09 UTC
GAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!! ITS FINALLY HERE!!!!!!!!!!!!
wheeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
omg this is so x3 the way they met they way they talk to each other through their messages XD so X3
the song's just so cute for a first time meeting

jong's so silly! first he denied that was him and then he just had to say that he was just helping that mystery girl with her earring! XD he's so bad at lying x3

i love you i love you i love you~~~♥♥♥♥♥

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ontokki August 13 2009, 02:22:19 UTC
fasdfjlas yes it's here and thank you so much for reading ;_;
it means so much that you like this chapter♥

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meggayi August 13 2009, 04:13:55 UTC
aww~ thank you for writing this! don't cry ^-^
aww~~ you're so cute~~ x3 ♥

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jjongaji August 16 2009, 20:48:47 UTC
Hi!!!
n.n

I really like the way u writte!
I've read "Use me, when you want to abuse me"
"You won't let me love you", "Please don't love" and the 3 "Please call me and see", they're so great! I really lov them!

Can I add u as a friend?? I want to read more of ur things!! ;_;

asdasd srry for my englih, I think it's not so good, so I hope u could understand me ><
Greetings!

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ontokki August 17 2009, 15:18:03 UTC
lol of course you can add me, though i don't friend lock my fanfics :)

thank you so much for enjoying my work!<3

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