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[phare_bzh]

Title: Decisions

Comments

[jackien1968]

I'm very interested to read the rest of this. The translation and editing are just fine. The English isn't perfect, but it's quite good, never confusing or distracting, and the vividness and emotional depth of your writing style are able to shine through without any problem.

Jackie

[phare_bzh]

thanks a lot, I'm happy to see the new story is well received! I hope you'll continue reading it.
best regards, Alex

[aileenfan]

Intriguing start. I'm waiting for more:)

[phare_bzh]

Thanks!!! I hope to add soon, the problem is RL both for me and for SAM!
Greetings from Como. Alex

[torry28]

Love to read a new story but its going to be painful I can see, I hope its not hemophiliac Larry is suffering from but better then madness. I wonder what Ennis is going to do, he seemed terrified that Jack had bad news but I'm sure this was not what he expected to hear.
Hope you update soon.Its hurts to see Jack so distressed.
Take care.
Hugs
Torry

[phare_bzh]

The plot is quite complicate, dear Torry, but soon some things will become clearer!

thanks a lot for following always!

Have a nice day, Alex

[phare_bzh]

Yes dear Jen, I hope to add someting soon, I'm also working of I cant' lose you again, I'd like to finish it, too.
Best regards, Alex

[suzysue2]

Good start and the translations fine. I'm looking forward to the next chapter.

Sue

[phare_bzh]

Thanks Sue, this is a new way of working for me, You know, since I was in high school I was the only one of my class who wrote compositions directly in english (the other translated ) so I must say that it's hard to transform italian concepts in english ones.
Grretings from Como LAke, Alex