takin a break from fma 107 incoherence

[pheonee]

TO POST THIS MONSTER.

It's actually a tiny little 50-sentence fic. But like. IT TOOK ME NINE MONTHS TO FINISH. The last 8 sentences I got to FOUGHT ME TOOTH AND NAIL. (First 35 prompts: a fortnight. Last 15: NINE MONTHS.)

Anyway. This is not officially endorsed by the 50setence comm, not even a little bit. I just saw nice prompts and wanted to

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[insaneladybug]

You caught my attention by saying Autor was in this, but I would have read anyway. ;) YAY Fakir/Ahiru sentences

[pheonee]

Thank you! I'm just the master of run-on sentences ;)

#7 is really poignant and powerful. And then it's immediately followed up by silliness. LOL.

Yeah, I briefly considered re-ordering them so they flowed better, but gave up after realising there were 50 sentences and I was on a tiny laptop. I don't think it's too bad...xD But ah, drunk!Ahiru. <3

I have such a clear image of #28.

So do I! Very much considering illustrating it. Hm...

don't entirely get #34

...Autor tries to teach Fakir how to play piano? xD (It doesn't, evidently, work.)

And a general squee-ful thank you very much! to everything else. :D

[insaneladybug]

LOL! You should totally illustrate #28 with Ahiru clinging to the horse's neck and screaming and Fakir trying to catch up. Priceless.

Ah! **snarks.** I bet Autor has never been so traumatized, either. LOL. That would also make a hilarious illustration. (Plus, we need more Autor art in the world.)

You're welcome! ^^ It was an awesome read.

[genarti]

Awwwwwwww.

Some of these are just plain adorable, and some of them are heartbreaking, and some of them are hilarious. And some are more than one of the above! (And hey, 50 sentencefics is not an output to sneeze at. It'd take me an age too.)

[pheonee]

Yay! Misson accomplished! \o/

Thank you ♥

(It's just that the first half came so easy. And then I couldn't get any more out. T_T)

[genarti]

(Yyyyyeah I know how that goes. There's a fic sitting on my harddrive right now that's all complete except for the "Here's the set-up!" intro, which is like pulling teeth to write I swear. Argh.)

[bookelfe]

These are totally, utterly adorable. I think my favorites may be Autor on the piano and the dance-mishaps and the dances that go right (uh, it is fairly obvious I have a weakness for waltzing) but they all made me beam!

[pheonee]

Waltzes are most excellent! I'm a terrible dancer, but I'm being taught a really basic box step at school ATM and it feels so pretty. <3_<3

Thank you! <3

[spwinkles]

I have to say my favorite's are #4, #24 and #44 (weird they all end in 4) but I really enjoyed reading all of them!

[pheonee]

Yay, thank you! ^_^

[anonymous]

These are all really fantastic, but my favourites were:

#13 - This just amuses me so much XD
#19 - Shakespear reference!!!
#22 - ...and this is why Rue doesn't ivite them to dinner parties.
#34 - Is Autor teaching Fakir how to play the piano? LOL even if that's the wrong interpretation, I'm totally going with it since that scenario is just hilarious and endearing.
#49 - In a word, epic. So awesome.

Thanks so much for sharing these!

[catte_noir]

Also (yes that's me above, grrrr stupid login error...) for some reason I though your lj cut on the main page was Autor speaking XD I can totally imagine him being all bitchy while reading/editing Fakir's grammatically incorrect ramblings.

[pheonee]

YAY someone got the Shakespeare reference! Our class was doing R&J as a project when I wrote it, and I couldn't help but throw "Balcony" back to the balcony scene. I wondered if it was too obscure! xD;

34--yes, he is >_> (It's not working very well)

Thank you for appreciating them! ;^;