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Jul 02, 2007 19:45

Title: Teen Spirit (2 of 2)
Rating: T
Summary: There is something strange going on with Ryan. Contains mild language and drug references.
Word Count: 1,648

I personally think this whole story is a load of rubbish but I'm using writing as a way to keep my mind off everything.

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fanfic 100, teen spirit

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mystoryinstereo July 2 2007, 19:04:21 UTC
rubbish my bum. that was so good. i love the ending; it made me all nostalgic. also, it made me want to write. so well done, that's a feat in itself.

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philippa_ July 3 2007, 06:54:35 UTC
Thanks Becky.

I'm glad you liked it and I inspired you to write.

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mystoryinstereo July 4 2007, 19:16:47 UTC
haha it's alright. i'm still on 2000 words either way :P

btw you have to watch starter for ten. it is so good!

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philippa_ July 3 2007, 06:56:01 UTC
I know. I wish the COhens were more understanding of Ryan in the show. It's a good thing Ryan didn't take drugs seeing as how Kirsten would react. I did warp them quite a bit but I like more understanding Cohens.

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60schic July 3 2007, 03:42:50 UTC
It's a shame that it took Ryan flipping out on drugs to get Sandy and Kirsten to notice something was wrong. Now that he's through withdrawal, he needs a shrink! But I guess we'll have to imagine all that....unless there's a sequel in your future?

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philippa_ July 3 2007, 06:58:51 UTC
I know, the thing is that I don't think Sandy or Kirsten would really notice anything that happens unless its durastic like Ryan taking drugs.

Thanks for commenting. I'm not sure if there is going to be sequal, I haven't really thought about it.

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fifimom July 3 2007, 05:47:49 UTC
Thanks for posting again quickly. This is good, sad but good. I want to believe Ryan would never seriosly use drugs but then why wouldn't he, it's what he knows, what life has taught him is the thing to do to cope (drugs or violence). Thanks for the story and I hope to read you again soon.

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philippa_ July 3 2007, 07:00:45 UTC
Thank you :)

I'm glad you liked it. It's always kind of sat on my mind about how Ryan was able to just fit in quickly into Newport and how we never see him drunk or anything. I thought I'd experiment a little bit.

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memories_zz9 July 3 2007, 06:23:02 UTC
Great! I like it.
One mistake: the first time you used "nightmares" you separated it into 2 words.

Gotta go. Need breakfast before I go out. See ya. Me

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philippa_ July 3 2007, 07:02:28 UTC
Thanks Em, I've changed it now. I'm glad you like it. I've had a few ideas for your Sharpe story as well so I should write that soon :)

I have to go as well, it is 8:01 and I am not on my way to school yet :S Oh dear!

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