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[philippa_]

Hello,

Okay so this is my contribution to the OCSFC4.

Title: Respect
Rating: PG
Word Count: 3,465

Comments

[emrose33]

Caleb was such a fab character, killed off way too soon.
I loved this, the Ryan/Caleb dialogue made me grin!

[philippa_]

I know, I was so sad when he died. He never did really settle things with Ryan. I'm glad you liked the story. Thanks for commenting.

[brandywine421]

Lovely!

[philippa_]

Thanks for commenting. I'm glad you liked it :)

[beachtree]

Sorry to be late to the party, and I hope your move went well. At the very least, you're settled enough to have Net access again, right

[philippa_]

The move itself went well thanks, but unfortunately we didn't get the internet working till last Friday, precisely 2 weeks after we originaly thought. I was so worried I was going to miss the deadline for this but luckily I didn't

[beachtree]

I'm glad you got settled, even if the transition wasn't the smoothest. They never do, but it's over, right

[philippa_]

Yes it is over except for a few extra boxes.

Thanks. I also think that he doesbn't trust new people as well because he put so much trust and love into his wife and she of course died. To be so close to someone and to have a family with them, losing them would be so hard. He's secluded himelf in a little box where he uses one daughter as a slave and just hands out money to the other (in season 1.) His eldest daughter just accepts it but I just see him as a little lonely old man who needs a hug and someone to talk to. HE doesn't have any friends, just people he does deals with like Uncle Shauny. He gets connected and sought after by girls like Gabrielle and Julie who are only after him for his money. He just needs someone to talk to then maybe he'd be nicer to those around him.

Also I'm glad you wthe two of them in the future

What on earth was I on about then? I apologise for my nonsence.

[radiotardislive]

I love this story!! Such good writing, and I must say how I loved the end: “So tell us, were you tempted at all just to leave him pinned?”

Ryan snorted. “Well I thought Kirsten would be a little pi… annoyed with me if I left him.” He joked.

“I knew it!” Sandy shouted, grinning."

Hehe... and I read this first in a manky bunk bed by the light of a torch! Oh yes! I saw this first hand, written by the author, with the author herself attempting to sleep in the bunk above me! *POWER!*

Wow, Phil, look at your reviews now. I am very jealous. *Off to post fic on lj to see if get similar reaction, and if not, to chuck axe at Phil's computer*

[philippa_]

Thanks Lozzer.

Haha dude we've been over this, differet fandom readers react in different ways. Please don't axe Ben junior!!! You're an incredible author, your readers are probably just too speachless by your skills to comment.

Also want to go back to the geog field trip, this time two days ago we were still in class lol.

[60schic]

This is quite nice. Love the morphine induced honesty and the little man pounding in his head. Concussed Ryan=Cute Ryan. Themus should have loved the angsty suspense!

[philippa_]

Thank you. I'm glad you like it :)