"Ryan breathed a sigh of relief when a hole in the mass before them became visible. He turned to Mr Nichol and they shared a relieved smile before they both realised what they were doing and turned away quickly." Love the grudging respect that Caleb and Ryan give each other here.
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pissy caleb...check
tolerant but cussing Caleb out in his head Ryan....check
in peril!Ryan....check
mini cliffhanger....check
groggy/drungged/Cohen's at his side Ryan.....check
and lastly, Caleb's begrudging admittance that Ryan is a good kid....check
*hugs story and pretends it is mine*
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Feel free to pretend it was written for you. I love the Caleb/Ryan interactions and I'm pleased people liked the way I dealt with it.
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Love the grudging respect that Caleb and Ryan give each other here.
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