ACT 2!!!!!!!!!!

[phoenix_wrock]

Okay, newest installment. Feeling okay about this one, though overall I feel like I'm loosing touch with the characters and what needs to happen. I know in my mind where this needs to go, but I want my audience to connect with the characters enough for the climax to make an impact. Do you all feel connections to the characters, at all?

Comments

[cc_weasel]

I'm really enjoying this (even when I don't say so) and I think they're relatable. :) I'm real curious to see where this is building up to!

[slythrn_barnbum]

So far, I feel quite connected with the characters, so you're right on track! Keep up the great work, hun.