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Sweet and Delectable, Chapter 1

Mar 27, 2010 17:52

Title: Sweet and Delectable
Author: Phreakycat
Rating: M
Pairing: Arthur/Merlin
Genre: Modern AU, romance, slash, some angst
Warnings: Some violence in future chapters, eventual m/m Sexitimes. Shameless over-use of pastry metaphors. Graphic descriptions of baked goods and sugary concoctions. The very likely possibility that this fic will make you ( Read more... )

slash, fic, merlin/arthur, merlin

Comments 81

salamandertoast March 28 2010, 05:31:48 UTC

Eeee, this story is delicious! I already love it. I'm just sad that I'll have to wait an entire week before the next chapter.

Oh, and now I've got a mad craving for baked goods. Thanks for that.

phreakycat March 28 2010, 06:29:24 UTC

Thank you! And Sorry about the possible increase in carbohydrates in your diet. To be fair, you were warned... XD

nyxelestia March 28 2010, 05:41:00 UTC

YOU WILL GIVE ME DENTAL PROBLEMS AND DIABETES. It's a good thing I have awesome insurance and a dentist appointment next month. :P

Seriously, though, I love baker!Merlin, his almost immediate desire for Arthur, and his plan of seduction. This is the story behind, "The quickest way to a man's heart is his stomach". :D Love Arthur complaining about being fat, though. He's going to go for a run and come into the shop all heavy-breathing and sweaty and smelling of his horrifyingly wonderful musk, right?

I can't wait for more!

phreakycat March 28 2010, 06:30:28 UTC

Thanks! *hands you toothpaste and a glucometer*

toffee_and_tea March 28 2010, 07:43:14 UTC

Whee! This is really cute. At it has bakery food! I love bakeries~

phreakycat March 28 2010, 20:26:14 UTC

Thanks! Mmmm.... baked goods....

loveelf March 28 2010, 08:45:49 UTC

I am so hungry for pastries right now! but its 8 at night and nothing would be open :(

Please please continue this! It's scrum-diddley-umptious.

phreakycat March 28 2010, 21:22:42 UTC

Thanks! *hands you an eclair*

starrienite March 28 2010, 10:21:58 UTC

Oh this is simply...well, delicious! I love how you use the different pastries to describe people and feelings. It's just marvelous and inventive and adds this incredible charm to the writing. I adore it! I can't wait to see Merlin seduce Arthur more with his fabulous pastry-making skillz hehe ^_^ Thanks so much for sharing and I look forward to the next part...hungrily (no really...those pastries sound amazing...i want one now O_O lol)
♥

phreakycat March 28 2010, 21:23:52 UTC

Aw, thanks for such great feedback! I'm proofreading the next part now. :)

(as an aside, I made a typo when I initially typed that response so that it read "proofreading the next PRAT" LOL!)